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<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 11:11, 11 July 2017</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l60">Line 60:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 60:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Book Review ==</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Book Review ==</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">At </del>the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">time </del>of this <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">article's entry </del>in the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">SuccuWiki</del>, <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">no review </del>was <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">available</del>. <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Tera has this </del>work on <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">her reading list </del>and will <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">review it shortly</del>.<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''</del></div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2017/06/11/a-review-of-clockwork-dom-episode-1-by-shiloh-saddler/ June 11, 2017]''</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Telesa is starving in a world where steam and science have overcome the dreams of humanity. A mistake finds her in the den of Garron, an incubus with a stable of humans, angered at her appearance. But rather than being cast away, Telesa is given a choice she cannot refuse. Can an incubus and a succubus share in a world where their survival is so tenuous? Or is the better question who is the one in control?</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The work, set in a steampunk universe, is lovely with depth in the setting, the erotic tones and how the characters play off each other. It’s well written, there’s a great deal of subplots and themes that drift in and out of the work as well. As such, as Telesa is drawn into Garron’s orbit, the story tells more of her submission to him, how his lair works and where </ins>the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">humans in his lair fit into the overall setting. The steampunk aspects are really well done, the detail </ins>of <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">things moving about, coming into contact, and the sexual actions, and reactions, are delightfully hot and telling. But most amazing to me is a single line in the work that explains why succubi and incubi have problems in </ins>this <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">universe. It doesn’t go into that deeply, but the suggested answer is really telling and unexpected.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The problem in the work, at least for me, is that both Telesa and Garron’s characters aren’t really explored as much as I wanted them to be. There’s so many questions about Telesa in how she came to be in the situation she finds herself, how Garron created his den, brought </ins>in the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">humans that exist in his lair. The work glossed over these points</ins>, <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">leaving them a teasing question. That </ins>was <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">the single part of this work that disappointed me the most</ins>. <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Telesa appears, Garron is angered, Telesa gives in and the story moves off towards the erotica. There’s so little character development in they not being human that when the erotica is over with, there’s a feeling that if neither had been said not to be human, it wouldn’t have changed the story much, if at all.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">But it does matter, and once past the erotica, as the story moves towards the conclusion, the point of they being non-human becomes important once more, leading to a moment in which Garron considers his actions and what might be next. It’s a telling point and that then brings the story back around to who Telesa is exactly. The questions are left unanswered, waiting for the next </ins>work <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">in the series and when that comes to be, there might be some surprises for all involved.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Saying that Telesa is a Succubus and Garron in an incubus is all good, but then not playing that off, to explain why Telesa finds herself where she is, or how Garron came to the position he holds leaves a lot of story to the side. There’s a fair balance between the erotica and the storytelling here, and I liked that very much, but too often there’s a hint of something else going </ins>on and <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">that never gets played out as I wanted it to.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Hopefully the author </ins>will <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">continue the series forwards, to open up this universe, to explain how succubi and incubi came to be in a steampunk world. The BDSM theme needs a bit more embellishment, a better tone, a little more exploration to show that both Telesa and Garron are who they seem to be. It’s a bit of a tightrope for the author, but if there’s some really good character development, then there’s a delightfully interesting series to come.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Three and a half out of five pitchforks.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">A good start to a new series, but there needs to be more time spent in the characters themselves than just the setting and the erotica. Telesa is a mystery overall as is Garron. With the setting done and the world set, then next thing should be opening both to who they are and what each wants and needs</ins>.</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== External Links ==</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== External Links ==</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*[https://www.amazon.com/Clockwork-Dom-Episode-Shiloh-Saddler-ebook/dp/B072MM8KJS/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*[https://www.amazon.com/Clockwork-Dom-Episode-Shiloh-Saddler-ebook/dp/B072MM8KJS/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div></td></tr> </table>

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<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 13:34, 2 July 2017</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l38">Line 38:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 38:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>'''Clockwork Dom Episode 1''' is an eBook written by Shiloh Saddler. It is the first work in the ''Clockwork Dom'' series by this author. In this work <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">one of </del>the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">characters </del>is a Succubus and <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">another </del>is an Incubus.</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>'''Clockwork Dom Episode 1''' is an eBook written by Shiloh Saddler. It is the first work in the ''Clockwork Dom'' series by this author. In this work the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">character Telesa </ins>is a Succubus and <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">the character Garron </ins>is an Incubus.</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> </table>

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<p>Created page with &quot;<a href="/wiki/Category:Film_and_Media" title="Category:Film and Media">Category:Film and Media</a> {{Infobox book &lt;!-- |italic title = (see above) --&gt; | name = Clockwork Dom&lt;br&gt;Episode 1 | image = File:ClockworkDom1.jpg|2...&quot;</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>[[Category:Film and Media]]<br /> {{Infobox book<br /> &lt;!-- |italic title = (see above) --&gt;<br /> | name = Clockwork Dom&lt;br&gt;Episode 1<br /> | image = [[File:ClockworkDom1.jpg|200px|alt=Clockwork Dom Episode 1 eBook Cover, written by Shiloh Saddler]]<br /> | image_caption = Clockwork Dom Episode 1 eBook Cover,&lt;br&gt;written by Shiloh Saddler<br /> | author = Shiloh Saddler<br /> | title_orig = <br /> | translator = <br /> | illustrator = <br /> | cover_artist = <br /> | country = <br /> | language = <br /> | series = Clockwork Dom<br /> | subject = <br /> | genre = <br /> | publisher = Pronoun<br /> | publisher2 = <br /> | pub_date = June 7, 2017<br /> | english_pub_date = <br /> | media_type = eBook<br /> | pages = 22 Pages<br /> | awards = <br /> | isbn = <br /> | oclc = <br /> | asin = B072MM8KJS<br /> | dewey = <br /> | congress = <br /> | preceded_by = <br /> | preceded_by_quotation_marks = <br /> | followed_by = <br /> | followed_by_quotation_marks = <br /> | wikisource =<br /> }}<br /> &#039;&#039;For other uses of the word [[Succubus]], see [[Succubus (disambiguation)]].&#039;&#039;<br /> <br /> &#039;&#039;For other uses of the word [[Incubus]], see [[Incubus (disambiguation)]].&#039;&#039;<br /> <br /> <br /> &#039;&#039;&#039;Clockwork Dom Episode 1&#039;&#039;&#039; is an eBook written by Shiloh Saddler. It is the first work in the &#039;&#039;Clockwork Dom&#039;&#039; series by this author. In this work one of the characters is a Succubus and another is an Incubus.<br /> <br /> <br /> == Overview ==<br /> *Title: Clockwork Dom Episode 1<br /> *Author: Shiloh Saddler<br /> *Published By: Pronoun<br /> *Length: 22 Pages<br /> *Format: eBook<br /> *ASIN: B072MM8KJS<br /> *Publishing Date: June 7, 2017<br /> <br /> <br /> ==Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki==<br /> *<br /> <br /> <br /> == Plot Summary ==<br /> A lost succubus arrives in an incubus’s den who has a fetish for torture and discovers his mechanical and steam powered playroom. If she is to feast upon the sexual essence of the humans in his stable she must play along too.<br /> <br /> <br /> == Book Review ==<br /> &#039;&#039;At the time of this article&#039;s entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.&#039;&#039;<br /> <br /> <br /> == External Links ==<br /> *[https://www.amazon.com/Clockwork-Dom-Episode-Shiloh-Saddler-ebook/dp/B072MM8KJS/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>

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