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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''At the time of this <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">article's entry </del>in the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">SuccuWiki</del>, <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">no review was available</del>. <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Tera has this </del>work on her <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">reading list </del>and will <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">review </del>it <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">shortly</del>.<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''</del></div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [http://www.succubus.net/blog/2015/12/27/a-review-of-incubus-by-aiden-darke/ December 27, 2015]''</ins></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Marcus is the Incubus of the work, and the story mainly revolves around him, his world, and how he draws Carrie into it. While that part of the story works well, there is some lovely heat in the story telling, there is some well done mind control aspects that I think worked, the story moved at breakneck speed for the most part, leaving really little or no time to understand what was happening to Carrie, or what Marcus wanted from her exactly. He isn’t a stereotypical incubus, thankfully, but at the same time there was, as a whole, a disconnection between himself and the events around him. </ins>At <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">least until Kara came into the story.</ins></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The work needs another editing pass to slow the story somewhat. Allow the characters to tell, think, express what is happening, then continue on. Allowing the story to catch its breath before rushing to the next climax would have, I think, made for a better read. Beyond </ins>this<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">, the author has a few points where a choice of word was incorrect. There is also one point where Marcus is called Maximus, which seems to be an error. But the most frustrating mistake comes </ins>in the <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">last pages of the work when Marcus tells a character to leave, a female character</ins>, <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">and she is described as a he. It took away what otherwise had tension and meaning, leaving me confused for a moment and I shouldn’t have been</ins>.</div></td></tr>
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''For other uses of the word [[Incubus]], see [[Incubus (disambiguation)]].''<br />
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'''Incubus''' is an eBook written by Aiden Darke. In this work the character Marcus is an Incubus and the character Kara is a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Incubus<br />
*Author: Aiden Darke<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 39 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B019M469KE<br />
*Publishing Date: December 19, 2015<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
Carrie leaves her career in academia when she falls under the spell of the mysterious Marcus. Soon she discovers he is an Incubus, a sex demon. But Marcus has his own problems when a Succubus, a female of his kind, moves into his territory. Marcus must draw on all Carrie's energy and sexuality to save himself and the entire city.<br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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== External Links ==<br />
*[http://www.amazon.com/Incubus-paranormal-erotica-Aiden-Darke-ebook/dp/B019M469KE/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS