http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Lingerie_Threeway_%28eBook%29Lingerie Threeway (eBook) - Revision history2026-08-11T08:44:37ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.43.8http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?title=Lingerie_Threeway_(eBook)&diff=42304&oldid=prevTeraS at 13:10, 20 March 20172017-03-20T13:10:53Z<p></p>
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''For other uses of the word [[Succubus]], see [[Succubus (disambiguation)]].''<br />
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'''Lingerie Threeway''' is an eBook written by Zayna Noble. It is the third work in the ''Pretty Package'' series by this author. In this work the character Derora is a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Lingerie Threeway<br />
*Author: Zayna Noble<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 24 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B06WWJZHR6<br />
*Publishing Date: February 22, 2017<br />
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==Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki==<br />
*[[The Job Swimsuits Her (eBook)|The Job Swimsuits Her]]<br />
*[[The Bra Identity (eBook)|The Bra Identity]]<br />
*[[Pretty Package (eBook)|Pretty Package]]<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
After accepting a set of lingerie that would turn him into a buxom blonde woman whenever he likes, Mike has come to owe a ravishing succubus one ultimate favor.<br />
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His task is to test a new set of bra and panties that transform at the command of a magical remote. What he doesn't realize is that as the lingerie transforms, so will he! What's worse, it's Derora's husband Gabe, a handsome and powerful man, that's in control of the remote!<br />
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Shifting from blonde to brunette, Asian to Redhead, each of Mikayla's bodies is hotter than the last. It's not long before she's desperate for more. Will Mikayla be able to keep her sanity under the ministrations of a succubus and her sexy lover?<br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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== External Links ==<br />
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06WWJZHR6/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS