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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">At </del>the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">time </del>of <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">this article's entry </del>in the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">SuccuWiki</del>, no <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">review </del>was <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">available</del>. <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Tera has </del>this work <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">on </del>her <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">reading list </del>and will <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">review it shortly</del>.<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''</del></div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [http://www.succubus.net/blog/2015/11/17/a-review-of-</ins>the<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">-jacie-series-by-a-del/ November 17, 2015]''</ins></div></td></tr>
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''For other uses of the word [[Succubus]], see [[Succubus (disambiguation)]].''<br />
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'''Needing Jacie''' is an eBook written by A. Del. It is the second work in the ''Jacie'' series by this author. In this work the character Jacie can be described as a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Needing Jacie<br />
*Author: A. Del<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 16 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B00UZK8S04<br />
*Publishing Date: March 19, 2015<br />
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==Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki==<br />
*[[Waking Jacie (eBook)|Waking Jacie]]<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
Jacie’s life has become a whirlwind of passionate encounters in the most thrilling of places, but she hasn’t quite recovered fully since her waking. When an illicit encounter leaves her thrilled yet unfulfilled, she returns to her sanctuary, only to find that not all is as it should be. <br />
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When the young man of the house, her most trusted companion, decides that he’ll work out his anger on the newly promiscuous succubus, Jacie is introduced to the darker side of her new life – where even those she’s loved forever will take all that she offers to others – whether she likes it or not! <br />
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... and now Jacie knows. <br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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== External Links ==<br />
*[http://www.amazon.com/Needing-Jacie-Paranormal-Erotica-Waking-ebook/dp/B00UZK8S04/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS