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''For other uses of the word [[Incubus]], see [[Incubus (disambiguation)]].''<br />
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'''The Incubus Journal: Chapter 6''', is an eBook written by The Mad Hatter. It is the sixth work in the ''Incubus Journal'' series by this author. In this work the character Chris Douglas is transformed into an Incubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: The Incubus Journal: Chapter 5<br />
*Author: The Mad Hatter<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 10 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B01LYUJT53<br />
*Publishing Date: September 16, 2016<br />
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==Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki==<br />
*[[The Incubus Journal: Chapter 1 (eBook)|The Incubus Journal: Chapter 1]]<br />
*[[The Incubus Journal: Chapter 2 (eBook)|The Incubus Journal: Chapter 2]]<br />
*[[The Incubus Journal: Chapter 3 (eBook)|The Incubus Journal: Chapter 3]]<br />
*[[The Incubus Journal: Chapter 4 (eBook)|The Incubus Journal: Chapter 4]]<br />
*[[Incubus Journal Chapters 1-4: What Happens When You Become A Literal Sex Demon? (eBook)|Incubus Journal Chapters 1-4: What Happens When You Become A Literal Sex Demon?]]<br />
*[[The Incubus Journal: Chapter 5 (eBook)|The Incubus Journal: Chapter 5]]<br />
*[[Incubus Journal: Complete (eBook)|Incubus Journal: Complete]]<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
Where does our protagonist find himself after a couple of months? What will he do when the demon who killed his previous incarnate shows up at his club? Does he have the power to enslave them, or will he be enslaved?<br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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== External Links ==<br />
*[https://www.amazon.com/Incubus-Journal-VI-Normalcy-Broken-ebook/dp/B01LYUJT53/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS