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'''Deal with a Devil''' is an eBook written by Stanley Sharpe. It is the second work in the ''Submitting to... A Hot Futa Succubus '' series by this author. In this work the character Valcynarix Blackheart is a | '''Deal with a Devil''' is an eBook written by Stanley Sharpe. It is the second work in the ''Submitting to... A Hot Futa Succubus '' series by this author. In this work the character Valcynarix Blackheart is a futa Succubus. | ||
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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2023/03/21/a-review-of-deal-with-a-devil-by-stanley-sharpe/ March 21, 2023]'' | ||
It’s one thing to be offered what you desire. It’s a bit more complicated when there’s a price to be paid. Not all deals are bad, some give what’s wanted most of all. All that needs to happen is to believe that anything might just be possible. | |||
The work continues on immediately from the prior work with Tim and Val coming to the terms of the deal for his soul and his submission to being Val’s pet. Much like the first work the story draws things out in order to reveal little things about Val that otherwise would have been an infodump. That works really well, tells something of Val’s character and then allows the story to move forwards. | |||
Val, the succubus of the story, remains as interesting throughout. There’s one particular point that mattered to the story overall, that being she can’t lie to Tim, but that also means that the truths she tells of him are exactly that. There’s a bit of transformation scenes along the way that worked well, they give Val something of an other self that I thought was intriguing. | |||
While the erotica has a very strong futa aspect along with Val’s succubus nature, the main focus revolves around Val’s MILF domination of Tim. It’s a bit over the top and felt at times to be losing its way as Tim lost himself to Val’s advances. Given that the point of the story is Val claiming Tim, it works as a whole. It might have been more interesting had Val been more dominant and Tim being more of an adoring pet than the toy he seems to become by the close of the work. | |||
Three and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
The world building and mythos is interesting around Val, but the erotica just didn’t have the heat overall. The story is getting a lot more complex and the characters are becoming more than they were at the beginning. Hopefully the story will focus a bit more in the next part and perhaps the story will move into Val’s world and what’s waiting there. | |||
Latest revision as of 17:16, 21 March 2023
| Deal with a Devil | |
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 Deal with a Devil eBook Cover, written by Stanley Sharpe | |
| Author(s) | Stanley Sharpe |
| Series | Submitting to... A Hot Futa Succubus |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | August 4, 2022 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 35 Pages |
| ISBN | 9781005770549 |
| ASIN | B0B8TN699Y |
| Preceded by | The Unwanted Demon |
| Followed by | Serving the Omnibus |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Deal with a Devil is an eBook written by Stanley Sharpe. It is the second work in the Submitting to... A Hot Futa Succubus series by this author. In this work the character Valcynarix Blackheart is a futa Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Deal with a Devil
- Author: Stanley Sharpe
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 35 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0B8TN699Y
- ISBN: 9781005770549
- Publishing Date: August 4, 2022
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- The Unwanted Demon
- Serving the Omnibus
- A Match Made in Hell
- Submitting to... A Hot Futa Succubus MILF: The Complete Story
Plot Summary
Tim has a choice to make, concerning the alluring mature succubus, Valcynarix. Her tasters have proven convincing, opening his eyes to a world of pleasures that he cannot otherwise have. But to have them going forwards, he must submit. He must become her plaything, and exist on her terms. The beautiful demoness claims to be ideal for him, and appears to know his deepest desires. She's capable of changing how pleasure works, of eliciting ecstasy even from scenarios that shouldn't result in such carnal contentment. And of course, most tantalising of all, is the fact that the mature succubus is hardly shy about her need, at some point or other, to create a replacement demoness for the Sisterhood, with Tim's help...
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 21, 2023
It’s one thing to be offered what you desire. It’s a bit more complicated when there’s a price to be paid. Not all deals are bad, some give what’s wanted most of all. All that needs to happen is to believe that anything might just be possible.
The work continues on immediately from the prior work with Tim and Val coming to the terms of the deal for his soul and his submission to being Val’s pet. Much like the first work the story draws things out in order to reveal little things about Val that otherwise would have been an infodump. That works really well, tells something of Val’s character and then allows the story to move forwards.
Val, the succubus of the story, remains as interesting throughout. There’s one particular point that mattered to the story overall, that being she can’t lie to Tim, but that also means that the truths she tells of him are exactly that. There’s a bit of transformation scenes along the way that worked well, they give Val something of an other self that I thought was intriguing.
While the erotica has a very strong futa aspect along with Val’s succubus nature, the main focus revolves around Val’s MILF domination of Tim. It’s a bit over the top and felt at times to be losing its way as Tim lost himself to Val’s advances. Given that the point of the story is Val claiming Tim, it works as a whole. It might have been more interesting had Val been more dominant and Tim being more of an adoring pet than the toy he seems to become by the close of the work.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
The world building and mythos is interesting around Val, but the erotica just didn’t have the heat overall. The story is getting a lot more complex and the characters are becoming more than they were at the beginning. Hopefully the story will focus a bit more in the next part and perhaps the story will move into Val’s world and what’s waiting there.