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'''Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert''' is an eBook written by Reed James. It is the second work in the ''Succubus's Naughty Valentine Treat'' series by this author. In this work | '''Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert''' is an eBook written by Reed James. It is the second work in the ''Succubus's Naughty Valentine Treat'' series by this author. In this work the character Delilah is a Succubus. | ||
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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2024/06/16/a-review-of-enjoying-the-succubuss-sultry-dessert-by-reed-james/ June 16, 2024]'' | ||
Delilah is working her magic so that Tony gets a chance with every girl he’s dreamed about. One way or the other, she’ll make sure that he gets everything he wants and more. | |||
Continuing on immediately from the prior work, Tony finds himself on a date with the hot girl he’s dreamed of while Delilah sees to it that his date, and Delilah herself, make every one of his naught dreams a reality. The story as a result mainly focuses on the three having erotic couplings in many different ways in an honestly very cheesy way, the dialogue especially. There’s really not a lot of heat in the erotica, not being much more than adult film in tone and passions. | |||
Delilah’s purpose has become not much more than a means for Tony to get what he wants overall. As a result, she’s there on the edge of the story to push Tony and his date into having sex and then getting herself in the middle of it to enjoy it as well. But with that comes really no development of her as a character beyond a bit of teasing and suggestive comments. Honestly I wanted her to be more than a sex toy in the story, but she didn’t feel used much more than that. | |||
Again there is a sense that some of the erotica has been done before, the settings, dialogue and overall feeling just seems so very familiar. There’s a lack of real passion and what heat there is just didn’t appeal to me. | |||
One out of five pitchforks. | |||
While Delilah remains central to the story, she’s becoming less and less important which is a shame. Once again a succubus character is a means to an end and being so seems too repetitive and I don’t think it needed to be that way. We’ll see what the next part brings, I think that’s going to be once more a harem story focus, but I really hope it isn’t. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CVCYWGPF/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CVCYWGPF/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 11:10, 16 June 2024
| Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert | |
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 Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert eBook Cover, written by Reed James | |
| Author(s) | Reed James |
| Series | Succubus's Naughty Valentine Treat |
| Publisher | Naughty Ladies Publications |
| Publication date | February 9, 2024 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 34 Pages |
| ASIN | B0CVCYWGPF |
| Preceded by | Dreaming of the Naughty Succubus |
| Followed by | The Succubus & the Shy Cutie |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert is an eBook written by Reed James. It is the second work in the Succubus's Naughty Valentine Treat series by this author. In this work the character Delilah is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Enjoying the Succubus's Sultry Dessert
- Author: Reed James
- Published By: Naughty Ladies Publications
- Length: 34 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0CVCYWGPF
- Publishing Date: February 9, 2024
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- Dreaming of the Naughty Succubus
- The Succubus & the Shy Cutie
- Choosing His Valentine's Hottie
- Succubus's Naughty Valentine Treat Collection
Plot Summary
The succubus offers herself up as dessert for the nerd and his date!
Tony, a nerdy guy, thought he would be alone for Valentine's Day. Now the naughty succubus Delilah is arranging for him to find the love of his life. The wanton monster girl has already arranged his first date with one of the girls of his dreams.
Priscilla, a gorgeous rich girl, is first up.
The stuck-up rich girl is hot and eager to enjoy the nerd, but will her condescending attitude ruin dinner? Luckily, the wanton succubus is there to back up Tony. The wicked monster girl has the perfect idea for the couple's dessert.
Her succulent passion.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on June 16, 2024
Delilah is working her magic so that Tony gets a chance with every girl he’s dreamed about. One way or the other, she’ll make sure that he gets everything he wants and more.
Continuing on immediately from the prior work, Tony finds himself on a date with the hot girl he’s dreamed of while Delilah sees to it that his date, and Delilah herself, make every one of his naught dreams a reality. The story as a result mainly focuses on the three having erotic couplings in many different ways in an honestly very cheesy way, the dialogue especially. There’s really not a lot of heat in the erotica, not being much more than adult film in tone and passions.
Delilah’s purpose has become not much more than a means for Tony to get what he wants overall. As a result, she’s there on the edge of the story to push Tony and his date into having sex and then getting herself in the middle of it to enjoy it as well. But with that comes really no development of her as a character beyond a bit of teasing and suggestive comments. Honestly I wanted her to be more than a sex toy in the story, but she didn’t feel used much more than that.
Again there is a sense that some of the erotica has been done before, the settings, dialogue and overall feeling just seems so very familiar. There’s a lack of real passion and what heat there is just didn’t appeal to me.
One out of five pitchforks.
While Delilah remains central to the story, she’s becoming less and less important which is a shame. Once again a succubus character is a means to an end and being so seems too repetitive and I don’t think it needed to be that way. We’ll see what the next part brings, I think that’s going to be once more a harem story focus, but I really hope it isn’t.