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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2020/04/21/a-review-of-obeying-the-incubus-by-ciara-bane/ April 21. 2020]'' | ||
Max craves something, but no one can fulfill him. After so long being without, Malachi returns. But there will be a price to be paid to be given all he desires. | |||
The work is a very short piece of male/male erotica and, much like the first work, leaves story for the heat of the erotica. It’s far more focused on domination and submission than the first however. In being so, there’s something of a gap in the storytelling, mainly how scattered the main character’s thoughts are and now achingly needful he is for the incubus to return to him. | |||
As in the first work, the incubus of the series, Malachi, doesn’t make himself known until Max has been through other encounters, finding no relief, and being made to serve at Malachi’s feet. Those domination aspects didn’t really feel right to me at least, being more harsh than I prefer them to be. | |||
Given that so much of the story is focused on building up to the erotic scenes, there’s a lot of storytelling that was lost along the way and that’s a shame really. A bit more editing, a little more time spent in dealing with they why of things and not just the erotica would have I think made this much more interesting. | |||
Two and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
The work ends such that the following work in the series seems to be clearly in focus. At the same time, it’s too abrupt and left me a bit cold with the attitude which Malachi presented. Hopefully the series will manage to move from being about the sex alone to something more deep between the main characters. I really would like to see that happen. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/Obeying-Incubus-Erotic-Ciara-Bane-ebook/dp/B086MKDNXM/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/Obeying-Incubus-Erotic-Ciara-Bane-ebook/dp/B086MKDNXM/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 15:52, 21 April 2025
| Obeying the Incubus | |
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 Obeying the Incubus eBook Cover, written by Ciara Bane | |
| Author(s) | Ciara Bane |
| Series | Willing Submission |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | March 30, 2020 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 34 Pages |
| ASIN | B086MKDNXM |
| Preceded by | Summoning the Incubus |
| Followed by | Joining the Incubus |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Obeying the Incubus is an eBook written by Ciara Bane. It is the second work in the Willing Submission series by this author. In this work the character Malachi is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Obeying the Incubus
- Author: Ciara Bane
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 34 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B086MKDNXM
- Publishing Date: March 30, 2020
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
After Max's encounter with a sexy demon, he's finding himself more insatiable than ever. Though it has its perks—it should mean he'll have enough energy to feed his master, should Malachi ever return. Spending his evening hooking up in the club with a hot daddy and his shy friend, Max figures that'll be it for his night. But Malachi has other ideas—his master is the only one who will allow Max true release, now, but he'd better be willing to beg...
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 21. 2020
Max craves something, but no one can fulfill him. After so long being without, Malachi returns. But there will be a price to be paid to be given all he desires.
The work is a very short piece of male/male erotica and, much like the first work, leaves story for the heat of the erotica. It’s far more focused on domination and submission than the first however. In being so, there’s something of a gap in the storytelling, mainly how scattered the main character’s thoughts are and now achingly needful he is for the incubus to return to him.
As in the first work, the incubus of the series, Malachi, doesn’t make himself known until Max has been through other encounters, finding no relief, and being made to serve at Malachi’s feet. Those domination aspects didn’t really feel right to me at least, being more harsh than I prefer them to be.
Given that so much of the story is focused on building up to the erotic scenes, there’s a lot of storytelling that was lost along the way and that’s a shame really. A bit more editing, a little more time spent in dealing with they why of things and not just the erotica would have I think made this much more interesting.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work ends such that the following work in the series seems to be clearly in focus. At the same time, it’s too abrupt and left me a bit cold with the attitude which Malachi presented. Hopefully the series will manage to move from being about the sex alone to something more deep between the main characters. I really would like to see that happen.