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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2021/12/03/a-review-of-the-cambion-by-v-kent/ December 3, 2021]'' | ||
Margot has been fawning over her professor for a long time. A statue offers something unique for her to experience which might bring them closer together. But not everything is as it seems, and the door might be opened to something otherworldly. | |||
This is mainly a story of possession that leads to the erotica which takes over the story afterwards. It’s not really a story about an incubus, though the demon of the work has those aspects. Overall the erotica didn’t have much heat, much of the moments are hot flashes with some adult movie spice to them. There’s not much character development once the erotica comes into play and that’s a shame. | |||
The story before the erotica has promise, there’s a story that could have been told about the statue, about the past in flashbacks or something similar. It’s a bit disappointing that the professor didn’t understand what a cambion was, I don’t think that really worked well considering all else he was aware of. It’s a plot hole that could have been handled better. | |||
The work, overall, needs more added to it. The erotica could be given more heat, the story more depth and, probably most of all, Margot could have been explored further in her wants, needs, and I think getting further into how the demon/incubus changes her would have added a lot. | |||
Two and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
It’s less a story about an incubus than one about a possession and what follows. Overall it had some promise, but really didn’t explore the story beyond the erotica for the most part. Perhaps telling more of the story of the statue, or the past seen through the eyes of the incubus might have been something to make things more interesting. Otherwise this just didn’t have the heat, or the story, I’d hoped for. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09GNKXHNX/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09GNKXHNX/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 14:42, 3 December 2021
| The Cambion | |
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 The Cambion eBook Cover, written by V. Kent | |
| Author(s) | V. Kent |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | September 18, 2021 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 16 Pages |
| ASIN | B09GNKXHNX |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
The Cambion is an eBook written by V. Kent. In this work one of the main characters is possessed by an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: The Cambion
- Author: V. Kent
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 16 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B09GNKXHNX
- Publishing Date: September 18, 2021
Plot Summary
Grad student Margot has been crushing on her tweedy archaeology professor for five years, so when she learns he wants to do some “experiments” with an artifact he believes was used in ancient sexual rituals, she wants in.
When he summons a sex demon, it’s too much for him to handle… but can Margot handle the demon, and fulfill her sexual fantasies at the same time?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on December 3, 2021
Margot has been fawning over her professor for a long time. A statue offers something unique for her to experience which might bring them closer together. But not everything is as it seems, and the door might be opened to something otherworldly.
This is mainly a story of possession that leads to the erotica which takes over the story afterwards. It’s not really a story about an incubus, though the demon of the work has those aspects. Overall the erotica didn’t have much heat, much of the moments are hot flashes with some adult movie spice to them. There’s not much character development once the erotica comes into play and that’s a shame.
The story before the erotica has promise, there’s a story that could have been told about the statue, about the past in flashbacks or something similar. It’s a bit disappointing that the professor didn’t understand what a cambion was, I don’t think that really worked well considering all else he was aware of. It’s a plot hole that could have been handled better.
The work, overall, needs more added to it. The erotica could be given more heat, the story more depth and, probably most of all, Margot could have been explored further in her wants, needs, and I think getting further into how the demon/incubus changes her would have added a lot.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
It’s less a story about an incubus than one about a possession and what follows. Overall it had some promise, but really didn’t explore the story beyond the erotica for the most part. Perhaps telling more of the story of the statue, or the past seen through the eyes of the incubus might have been something to make things more interesting. Otherwise this just didn’t have the heat, or the story, I’d hoped for.