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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2020/10/23/a-review-of-at-her-mercy-by-mistress-ty/ October 23, 2020]'' | ||
There are desires that a soul can possess which seem impossible to have come true. A wish offered, and accepted, can bring desires new and unexpected. Sometimes it requires a pact with the impossible to be brought to life. | |||
The story tells of a gender transformation with a succubus being a small part of the story. Lilith, the succubus of the work, can be quite delightful in her snark and nature, and it held some promise at the start, but it didn’t really follow through. | |||
It’s something less of a succubus story being that the story’s focus was on the main character’s transformation. Lilith is interesting on occasion through the story, but really not enough to say she’s part of it more than a means to an end. It’s a shame really, there seems to be options and stories with her, but just not used well. | |||
The erotica is somewhat fleeting, there’s not a lot of heat to be found. The transformation aspects work well enough, but the place where things end seems over the top and somewhat disappointing considering all else that came before. | |||
Two and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
As a gender transformation work, there are parts that work, but otherwise Lilith just isn’t as present as she might have been which makes this being a succubus story somewhat less. Perhaps a bit more realistic transformation, a bit more focus on the why of things might have made this more than it is. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08LNV4K2P/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08LNV4K2P/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 21:45, 17 December 2021
| At Her Mercy | |
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 At Her Mercy eBook Cover, written by Mistress Ty | |
| Author(s) | Mistress Ty |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 21, 2020 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 20 Pages |
| ASIN | B08LNV4K2P |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
At Her Mercy is an eBook written by Mistress Ty. In this work the character Lilith is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: At Her Mercy
- Author: Mistress Ty
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 20 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B08LNV4K2P
- Publishing Date: October 21, 2020
Plot Summary
You never believed in magic or the supernatural, until the day you summoned a succubus. She tells you that she'll fulfill your darkest sexual desire, and uncovers your secret, a longing to be a woman. You adamantly deny her claim but she knows the truth, and is going to change you whether you want it or not.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on October 23, 2020
There are desires that a soul can possess which seem impossible to have come true. A wish offered, and accepted, can bring desires new and unexpected. Sometimes it requires a pact with the impossible to be brought to life.
The story tells of a gender transformation with a succubus being a small part of the story. Lilith, the succubus of the work, can be quite delightful in her snark and nature, and it held some promise at the start, but it didn’t really follow through.
It’s something less of a succubus story being that the story’s focus was on the main character’s transformation. Lilith is interesting on occasion through the story, but really not enough to say she’s part of it more than a means to an end. It’s a shame really, there seems to be options and stories with her, but just not used well.
The erotica is somewhat fleeting, there’s not a lot of heat to be found. The transformation aspects work well enough, but the place where things end seems over the top and somewhat disappointing considering all else that came before.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
As a gender transformation work, there are parts that work, but otherwise Lilith just isn’t as present as she might have been which makes this being a succubus story somewhat less. Perhaps a bit more realistic transformation, a bit more focus on the why of things might have made this more than it is.