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'''Seducing My Roommate''' is an eBook written by Roxxi Rhodes. It is the second work in the ''Legacy of Lilith'' series by this author. In this work Succubi | '''Seducing My Roommate''' is an eBook written by Roxxi Rhodes. It is the second work in the ''Legacy of Lilith'' series by this author. In this work the characters Mandi and Kayla are Succubi. | ||
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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2022/11/04/a-review-of-seducing-my-roommate-by-roxxi-rhodes/ November 4, 2022]'' | ||
Being a succubus isn’t Mandi’s biggest problem. No what really drives her crazy are the lusts and unending desire that push her limits to the edge before falling over them. For her roommate Kayla, this will bring a life-changing surprise sooner or later. | |||
The work is a story of gradual transformation into being a Succubus for both main characters which takes up most of the story. As such, there’s much told of physical changes and then the mental changes which both characters deal with. The change being something turned towards and elemental than sexual form overall. | |||
The two succubi of the story, Mandi and Kayla, are very similar in their succubus forms and personalities when fully transformed. When everything is finished, they are more bestial in form, overtly demonic in appearance than sensual as most succubi are in most stories. | |||
The work could use an editing pass to expand on what little Mandi explains to Kayla about their kind and what they are. The world and mythos building needs to be told beyond the character transformations which is barely hinted at. | |||
Three out of five pitchforks. | |||
The transformations are the focus of the work and as such there’s really very little in the way of actual succubus themes. It’s just really not a succubus story overall, though the core of is there. Getting past the transformations and focusing on the seduction aspects would be interesting because there’s just not enough of that here. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B8JNKK36/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B8JNKK36/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 14:52, 4 November 2022
| Seducing My Roommate | |
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 Seducing My Roommate eBook Cover, written by Roxxi Rhodes | |
| Author(s) | Roxxi Rhodes |
| Series | Legacy of Lilith |
| Publisher | Dirty Diva Press |
| Publication date | August 2, 2022 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 24 Pages |
| ASIN | B0B8JNKK36 |
| Preceded by | Corrupting the Coed |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Seducing My Roommate is an eBook written by Roxxi Rhodes. It is the second work in the Legacy of Lilith series by this author. In this work the characters Mandi and Kayla are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: Seducing My Roommate
- Author: Roxxi Rhodes
- Published By: Dirty Diva Press
- Length: 24 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0B8JNKK36
- Publishing Date: August 2, 2022
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
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Twenty-something Mandi rushes home after a close call on the bus. It’s been too long since her last sexual release, and now her inner demon is taking control—literally and figuratively. Mandi escapes into the bathroom, but before she can take matters into her own hand, her sexy roommate, Kayla, returns from a long day at work. Frustrated and burning with lust, Mandi goes out to greet her best friend. But it doesn’t take long before her dark, hellish secret is revealed…
And she’s not the only one bursting out of her clothes with unnatural curves.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on November 4, 2022
Being a succubus isn’t Mandi’s biggest problem. No what really drives her crazy are the lusts and unending desire that push her limits to the edge before falling over them. For her roommate Kayla, this will bring a life-changing surprise sooner or later.
The work is a story of gradual transformation into being a Succubus for both main characters which takes up most of the story. As such, there’s much told of physical changes and then the mental changes which both characters deal with. The change being something turned towards and elemental than sexual form overall.
The two succubi of the story, Mandi and Kayla, are very similar in their succubus forms and personalities when fully transformed. When everything is finished, they are more bestial in form, overtly demonic in appearance than sensual as most succubi are in most stories.
The work could use an editing pass to expand on what little Mandi explains to Kayla about their kind and what they are. The world and mythos building needs to be told beyond the character transformations which is barely hinted at.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The transformations are the focus of the work and as such there’s really very little in the way of actual succubus themes. It’s just really not a succubus story overall, though the core of is there. Getting past the transformations and focusing on the seduction aspects would be interesting because there’s just not enough of that here.