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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2022/02/20/a-review-of-a-witchs-folly-by-vicki-gallus/ February 20, 2022]'' | ||
The work mainly focuses on a bimbo transformation driven by the succubus of the story. It’s very much a case of the main characters making an ill worded wish and how that makes things unravel. There’s really no feeling of the story being dragged out or mistepping, each scene works well with the next and the result is a surprisingly well told succubus domination story that I enjoyed. | |||
Andriel, the succubus of the work, is quite the manipulative creature, using her powers of suggestion and seduction to capture the souls of both main characters and turn them into what she wants them to be. There’s an interesting moment for her character as well that was a bit unexpected but fit the story well in the transformation and entrapment of the main characters. | |||
The erotica is a slow burn from beginning to end, really never becoming something unique, much of the transformation aspects of the story focus on the bimbofication of the main characters. That is done really well, especially in how Andriel uses their own desires and hidden wants and needs. The transformations themselves are really well done, along with the hints of mind control and that adds heat to the story. | |||
Four out of five pitchforks. | |||
The work ended in a way that felt a bit disappointing. It feels like there needs to be another chapter or two at least if not a follow on story. Actually that would be a really good idea as the transformed main characters are in situations of peril that I’d like to see developed further. The thought of both, or at least one of them, becoming a succubus and taking the story in a new direction is interesting and might be something to consider. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09JSY4Q9T/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09JSY4Q9T/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 10:25, 20 February 2022
| A Witch's Folly | |
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 A Witch's Folly eBook Cover, written by Vicki Gallus | |
| Author(s) | Vicki Gallus |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 18, 2021 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 62 Pages |
| ASIN | B09JSY4Q9T |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
A Witch's Folly is an eBook written by Vicki Gallus. In this work the character Andriel can be described as a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: A Witch's Folly
- Author: Vicki Gallus
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 62 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B09JSY4Q9T
- Publishing Date: October 18, 2021
Plot Summary
Darren's wife is a witch. Their life is one of suburban ordinariness until one day, a demon summoning goes awry. Faced with the unimaginable sexual desire of the denizen of hell, Darren and Lydia are no match. They will transform, change and submit to their demon mistress.
Darren and Lydia's deepest desires will be fulfilled as they transform into voluptous, ditzy bimbos.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on February 20, 2022
The work mainly focuses on a bimbo transformation driven by the succubus of the story. It’s very much a case of the main characters making an ill worded wish and how that makes things unravel. There’s really no feeling of the story being dragged out or mistepping, each scene works well with the next and the result is a surprisingly well told succubus domination story that I enjoyed.
Andriel, the succubus of the work, is quite the manipulative creature, using her powers of suggestion and seduction to capture the souls of both main characters and turn them into what she wants them to be. There’s an interesting moment for her character as well that was a bit unexpected but fit the story well in the transformation and entrapment of the main characters.
The erotica is a slow burn from beginning to end, really never becoming something unique, much of the transformation aspects of the story focus on the bimbofication of the main characters. That is done really well, especially in how Andriel uses their own desires and hidden wants and needs. The transformations themselves are really well done, along with the hints of mind control and that adds heat to the story.
Four out of five pitchforks.
The work ended in a way that felt a bit disappointing. It feels like there needs to be another chapter or two at least if not a follow on story. Actually that would be a really good idea as the transformed main characters are in situations of peril that I’d like to see developed further. The thought of both, or at least one of them, becoming a succubus and taking the story in a new direction is interesting and might be something to consider.