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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
''At the time of | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2025/12/21/a-review-of-the-first-succubus-by-carey-walker/ December 21, 2025]'' | ||
At the beginning of time she was, the world coming to form around her. But her need changed her, recreating her moment to moment. From nothingness she once was, forever changed and more. | |||
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash which is more about the main character’s transformation over time and space into the being called Lilith at the close. It’s less about the erotica than about those transformations, the shifts in thought, the change in who and what she was towards her final form at the end. | |||
It’s a telling story really, to see the ancient world through her eyes, to feel the hunger she is possessed with. The growing of her powers, her claim on others to fall to her hunger and then what follows is really well done. | |||
The main character being Lilith isn’t revealed until the close, but from the start, and the book’s title, it’s clear it is her. She’s not described as a demoness or succubus exactly, though her consuming of others is something akin to that aspect. It’s just that little bit different and in being so leaves a story that is both familiar and so very unique as well. | |||
Three and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
It’s really a fascinating idea for the origin story of Lilith, in a way that leaves a lot to think about. It’s a shame this is such a short work, there’s a lot of story that could be created from what is here and where this could follow on. A passage through history, present and future feels like it would add a lot as well. So very unique and quite thought-provoking as well. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F4G3319B/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F4G3319B/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 09:51, 21 December 2025
| The First Succubus | |
|---|---|
 The First Succubus eBook Cover, written by Carey Walker | |
| Author(s) | Carey Walker |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | April 9, 2025 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 9 Pages |
| ASIN | B0F4G3319B |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
The First Succubus is an eBook written by Carey Walker. In this work the character Lilith can be described as a proto-Succubus carrying through to her final form as a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: The First Succubus
- Author: Carey Walker
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 9 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0F4G3319B
- Publishing Date: April 9, 2025
Plot Summary
She came from the Neolithic plains of Africa...To prey on man
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on December 21, 2025
At the beginning of time she was, the world coming to form around her. But her need changed her, recreating her moment to moment. From nothingness she once was, forever changed and more.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash which is more about the main character’s transformation over time and space into the being called Lilith at the close. It’s less about the erotica than about those transformations, the shifts in thought, the change in who and what she was towards her final form at the end.
It’s a telling story really, to see the ancient world through her eyes, to feel the hunger she is possessed with. The growing of her powers, her claim on others to fall to her hunger and then what follows is really well done.
The main character being Lilith isn’t revealed until the close, but from the start, and the book’s title, it’s clear it is her. She’s not described as a demoness or succubus exactly, though her consuming of others is something akin to that aspect. It’s just that little bit different and in being so leaves a story that is both familiar and so very unique as well.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
It’s really a fascinating idea for the origin story of Lilith, in a way that leaves a lot to think about. It’s a shame this is such a short work, there’s a lot of story that could be created from what is here and where this could follow on. A passage through history, present and future feels like it would add a lot as well. So very unique and quite thought-provoking as well.