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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2026/02/13/a-review-of-remembering-the-lost-girl-by-carey-walker/ February 13, 2026]'' | ||
When Travis was young, he accidentally saw something and someone he never should have. A mystery woman that haunts him until the day he returns and discovers she has been waiting for him. What she needs and what she offers are both the beginning and the end. | |||
The work is something of a mystery story with a bit of a succubus theme to the erotica, if that is so very limited and barely appears. It’s also, in a way, a coming of age story for the main character which having a succubus connected to is something rather different. | |||
The story itself is somewhat rushed, there’s really not a lot of character development. There’s just enough told about them that an idea of them is given before the story moves onwards to having the succubus appear. | |||
Lilith, the succubus of the story, is very much a mystery. How she came to be where she is just never gets explored well. She is very much a succubus, she tempts, her powers of mind control come into play and she feeds on souls. It’s difficult to call her evil exactly as what she does is a matter of survival and being trapped just makes that not much more than what she has to do. | |||
Lilith’s prison, for lack of a better way to describe it, gives her something of a Rapunzel aspect to her character which was interesting and I would have really liked to know more about her. There’s no question of what she wants, and the result of doing so, but the story does not get into that in the climax and I think that was a part of the story which really needed to be told but it wasn’t. | |||
Three out of five pitchforks. | |||
Like so many other works by this author, there are pieces of the story puzzle that are missing and it’s honestly a shame. Lilith’s background, where she came from, how things developed are all for the most part missing. How the work ends leaves things very open ended, which does work, but again it’s rushed, there are opportunities for more story to be told, and they aren’t. It would be interesting to see a follow on story to see If Lilith seeks out Travis or if something else happens. Quite a lot to wonder about, it’s a shame that likely will never happen. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F6K9H3SL/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0F6K9H3SL/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 11:16, 13 February 2026
| Remembering the Lost Girl | |
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 Remembering the Lost Girl eBook Cover, written by Carey Walker | |
| Author(s) | Carey Walker |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | April 25, 2025 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 18 Pages |
| ASIN | B0F6K9H3SL |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Remembering the Lost Girl is an eBook written by Carey Walker. In this work the character Lilith is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Remembering the Lost Girl
- Author: Carey Walker
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 18 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0F6K9H3SL
- Publishing Date: April 25, 2025
Plot Summary
An encounter with a woman who seemed lost. But she is no mere woman. She is a succubus.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on February 13, 2026
When Travis was young, he accidentally saw something and someone he never should have. A mystery woman that haunts him until the day he returns and discovers she has been waiting for him. What she needs and what she offers are both the beginning and the end.
The work is something of a mystery story with a bit of a succubus theme to the erotica, if that is so very limited and barely appears. It’s also, in a way, a coming of age story for the main character which having a succubus connected to is something rather different.
The story itself is somewhat rushed, there’s really not a lot of character development. There’s just enough told about them that an idea of them is given before the story moves onwards to having the succubus appear.
Lilith, the succubus of the story, is very much a mystery. How she came to be where she is just never gets explored well. She is very much a succubus, she tempts, her powers of mind control come into play and she feeds on souls. It’s difficult to call her evil exactly as what she does is a matter of survival and being trapped just makes that not much more than what she has to do.
Lilith’s prison, for lack of a better way to describe it, gives her something of a Rapunzel aspect to her character which was interesting and I would have really liked to know more about her. There’s no question of what she wants, and the result of doing so, but the story does not get into that in the climax and I think that was a part of the story which really needed to be told but it wasn’t.
Three out of five pitchforks.
Like so many other works by this author, there are pieces of the story puzzle that are missing and it’s honestly a shame. Lilith’s background, where she came from, how things developed are all for the most part missing. How the work ends leaves things very open ended, which does work, but again it’s rushed, there are opportunities for more story to be told, and they aren’t. It would be interesting to see a follow on story to see If Lilith seeks out Travis or if something else happens. Quite a lot to wonder about, it’s a shame that likely will never happen.