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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2026/05/31/a-review-of-feeding-my-succubus-by-eva-fox/ May 31, 2026]'' | ||
When one is drunk, one should never do unwise things. A summoning that never should have been, a succubus who controls and dominates isn’t what Ryan ever thought of. As for Lilithea, mortals are there to be played with, perhaps made to be a toy. Sometimes what you think will happen is just one step on the way to what does. | |||
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash focused on succubus domination, seduction and mutual need. It’s quite fast paced, the story does not pause between moments and overall that does work, if feeling a bit too much in a rush to get to the last page. | |||
The heat in the erotica is delightful, the characters have depth, and there is quite a bit of world building on the edges of the story to keep things interesting. There are a few points where the domination aspects come very close to being too over the top, but that manages to be avoided for the sake of holding onto the heat and how the relationship between the main characters unfolds. | |||
Lilithea, the succubus of the story, isn’t exactly evil, though there are hints of a side of her that doesn’t quite come out. That’s for the better really as her being a sedcutress, tempting and teasing for Ryan to fall to her wiles is a much better story for it. She is very dominant of course, but that’s wrapped in a form of pleasure that gives a tone to the story, and to Lilithea that I liked very much. | |||
Three and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
The story closes in a place that feels right for the main characters and offers a place for them if another work was going to appear. However the rushing to the climax of the story didn’t seem right with all that had come before, the time taken to get to the place where the characters found themselves. As well written as this story is, as much has the story is a delight, this honestly needed at least another ten pages to tie up a lot of loose ends. I’d even say this entire work needs to be transformed into a full length novel because there is so much depth and story to tell that it just didn’t quite fit into what was allowed and that’s a shame. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1745043/ This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com] | *[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1745043/ This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 14:07, 31 May 2026
| Feeding My Succubus | |
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 Feeding My Succubus eBook Cover, written by Eva Fox | |
| Author(s) | Eva Fox |
| Publisher | Smashwords |
| Publication date | April 8, 2025 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 13 Pages |
| ISBN | None |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Feeding My Succubus is an eBook written by Eva Fox. In this work the character Lilithea is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Feeding My Succubus
- Author: Eva Fox
- Published By: Smashwords
- Length: 13 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: None
- Publishing Date: April 8, 2025
Plot Summary
One drunken ritual. One whispered Latin chant. One life-devouring mistake.
Ryan never expected the succubus summoning to work—but Lilithea appeared in the flesh: beautiful, powerful, and starving. Bound by blood and lust, she feeds on his pleasure, tormenting him with public orgasms and mind-breaking oral worship. She uses him whenever—and wherever—she wants. And with every intense, draining climax, Ryan grows weaker.
At first, he's her toy. Then her addiction. Then her pet.
But Lilithea is more than a monster. She's seductive, cunning, and... changing. Beneath her hunger, Ryan begins to sense something deeper. Something dangerous.
If he can survive her appetite long enough, he might uncover a way to break—or remake—the bond. But if he fails, he'll be drained dry... body, mind, and soul.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 31, 2026
When one is drunk, one should never do unwise things. A summoning that never should have been, a succubus who controls and dominates isn’t what Ryan ever thought of. As for Lilithea, mortals are there to be played with, perhaps made to be a toy. Sometimes what you think will happen is just one step on the way to what does.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash focused on succubus domination, seduction and mutual need. It’s quite fast paced, the story does not pause between moments and overall that does work, if feeling a bit too much in a rush to get to the last page.
The heat in the erotica is delightful, the characters have depth, and there is quite a bit of world building on the edges of the story to keep things interesting. There are a few points where the domination aspects come very close to being too over the top, but that manages to be avoided for the sake of holding onto the heat and how the relationship between the main characters unfolds.
Lilithea, the succubus of the story, isn’t exactly evil, though there are hints of a side of her that doesn’t quite come out. That’s for the better really as her being a sedcutress, tempting and teasing for Ryan to fall to her wiles is a much better story for it. She is very dominant of course, but that’s wrapped in a form of pleasure that gives a tone to the story, and to Lilithea that I liked very much.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
The story closes in a place that feels right for the main characters and offers a place for them if another work was going to appear. However the rushing to the climax of the story didn’t seem right with all that had come before, the time taken to get to the place where the characters found themselves. As well written as this story is, as much has the story is a delight, this honestly needed at least another ten pages to tie up a lot of loose ends. I’d even say this entire work needs to be transformed into a full length novel because there is so much depth and story to tell that it just didn’t quite fit into what was allowed and that’s a shame.