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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2026/07/10/a-review-of-submitting-to-the-succubus-queen-by-katya-diamond/ July 10, 2026]'' | ||
He didn’t expect her to come, her presence ensnaring him to her bidding. A toy must obey his Mistress, and good toys receive their rewards and their punishments. | |||
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash with a bit of an hentai and anime tone to the overall story and the characters that appear. Very rough around the edges, the story presses from one scene to the next, the domination of the main character to submit completely and let himself to the succubi who tease and taunt him endlessly. | |||
The succubi of the story, Sylvia, Senna and Camilla, are very much stereotypical hentai or anime succubi in their appearance, voice and personality. The tease is bland, the heat is lacking and their nature as succubi are focused on one thing for the most part. Sylvia, the main succubus of the story, is a bit better fleshed out, but again there’s a stereotypical edge to her which could have been turned towards being something more than a harsh Domme succubus with a new toy under her heel. | |||
Two and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
The work ends abruptly, in the middle of a sentence and it really hurt the story and ending. Beyond that, the story needs another editing pass for formatting, words out of place, misused words and to bring more life and personality to the dialogue. As for the erotic heart, there is some, but like the rest this could have been so much better. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0FQL4RW1R/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0FQL4RW1R/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||
Latest revision as of 18:44, 10 July 2026
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 Submitting to the Succubus Queen eBook Cover, written by Katya Diamond | |
| Author(s) | Katya Diamond |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | September 9, 2025 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 17 Pages |
| ASIN | B0FQL4RW1R |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Submitting to the Succubus Queen is an eBook written by Katya Diamond. In this work the characters Sylvia, Senna and Camilla are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: Submitting to the Succubus Queen
- Author: Katya Diamond
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 17 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0FQL4RW1R
- Publishing Date: September 9, 2025
Plot Summary
"Kneel for me, human." - As Vladimir enters the depths of a Transylvanian forest in search of a long abandoned castle, he finds that rumors of succubi are in fact real. In the dead of night Sylvia saunters into his life, thigh-high boots and a confident glean in her eyes ready to take command. She offers him something more valuable than old relics from a castle, something no man could resist.
One ritual, a night of devotion and dreams coming true. She longs to gain power, he hopes to gain wealth. Will it just be for one night, or will Vladimir earn riches sweeter than gold?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 10, 2026
He didn’t expect her to come, her presence ensnaring him to her bidding. A toy must obey his Mistress, and good toys receive their rewards and their punishments.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash with a bit of an hentai and anime tone to the overall story and the characters that appear. Very rough around the edges, the story presses from one scene to the next, the domination of the main character to submit completely and let himself to the succubi who tease and taunt him endlessly.
The succubi of the story, Sylvia, Senna and Camilla, are very much stereotypical hentai or anime succubi in their appearance, voice and personality. The tease is bland, the heat is lacking and their nature as succubi are focused on one thing for the most part. Sylvia, the main succubus of the story, is a bit better fleshed out, but again there’s a stereotypical edge to her which could have been turned towards being something more than a harsh Domme succubus with a new toy under her heel.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work ends abruptly, in the middle of a sentence and it really hurt the story and ending. Beyond that, the story needs another editing pass for formatting, words out of place, misused words and to bring more life and personality to the dialogue. As for the erotic heart, there is some, but like the rest this could have been so much better.