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Tiktok Demonic Game (eBook)
| Tiktok Demonic Game | |
|---|---|
 Tiktok Demonic Game eBook Cover, written by Dona Diabla | |
| Author(s) | Dona Diabla |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | February 14, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 5 Pages |
| ASIN | B0BNJR1Q8F |
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Tiktok Demonic Game is an eBook written by Dona Diabla. In this work one of the characters can be described as being a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Tiktok Demonic Game
- Author: Dona Diabla
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 5 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BNJR1Q8F
- Publishing Date: February 14, 2023
Plot Summary
She has an unquenchable thirst for human blood, and the lustful men on Tiktok are as sexy as they are fleshy and delicious! Demon is on a mission to put an end to the dissolute men and their shameless deeds, and Tiktok perfectly serves her wicked agenda. She exits the depths of hell to a luxury loft where she can lure unknowing men and suck their blood dry. Through her sexy Tiktok videos, one by one, she catches them in her snare and gains some brutal man-eating techniques in the process. But the end of the world is closing in, and Demon has to make the hardest choice she’s ever made. So, what will it be?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 9, 2023
The hunger is unending, the need drives her onwards. The modern world offers so many delicious ways to find prey so easily that it’s a pleasure. A demon has her needs and dangling temptation makes taking her fill such a simple game.
The summary really doesn’t fit with what happens in the work. Some of it happens, but there’s not the complete story that the summary describes. If anything this work reads, and feels, like the opening scene in a larger story and ends at a point which is very abrupt. While it starts to tell the story, there’s a lot missing io the telling, the tone, and the main character herself.
The story is told from the perspective of the main character, who is a demoness, possibly a succubus, but there’s next to nothing described about her. She is never named, other than a mention of her eyes there’s no real physical description either. Her thoughts are scattered, as is the overall narrative, which makes the story read very bland. There’s a hint of her seducing her prey, there’s the start of some heat, but it goes nowhere. There is an attempt at some horror moments, but the writing just doesn’t bring that out well either.
The work needs editing in the narrative, the story needs to be expanded into something more than what this is. It would be good to see the main character interacting with her prey to bring them to her. It would help to tell about her form, her powers drawing prey to her. Bringing more heat to the entrapment and what follows would make things a lot more interesting.
This work is just far too short, far too unfocused. What has been written could be used as an outline from which the story could work from. Tell the story of where she came from, what’s her history. For that matter, what’s the main character’s name? Move on from where this story closes towards the last line in the summary which is never explored here. There are so many ways this could be so much better and, honestly, it really should be.
One out of five pitchforks.
This is more of a pamphlet than anything else story-wise. There’s nothing much beyond a single scene that hints at something more and really that didn’t have to be. Telling more of a story about the main character, giving her a name, breathing life into the seduction and luring in her prey would have added a lot. This just feels so disappointing and it didn’t need to be.