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Suburban Succubus (eBook II)
| Suburban Succubus | |
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 Suburban Succubus eBook Cover, written by Fenchurch Francisco | |
| Author(s) | Fenchurch Francisco |
| Series | Suburban Succubus |
| Publisher | Smashwords |
| Publication date | March 27, 2024 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 18 Pages |
| ISBN | None |
| Followed by | Suburban Succubus: Part Two |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Suburban Succubus is an eBook written by Fenchurch Francisco. It is the first work in the Suburban Succubus series by this author. In this work the characters Cassandra and Viola are futa Succubi.
Overview
- Title: Suburban Succubus
- Author: Fenchurch Francisco
- Published By: Smashwords
- Length: 18 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: None
- Publishing Date: March 27, 2024
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
Cassandra is just your average unassuming middle-aged single mother – she's dealing with the stress of raising a teenage daughter, coping with problems at the office and generally just trying to take life one day at a time.
And this morning, she woke up with a massive futa cock between her legs.
Struggling with the lustful impulses and strange new desires flooding her mind, she does her best to deal with the changes to her body... but when masturbation won't keep her erection down and a visit to her doctor ends in the cute blonde physician getting showered in hot cum, Cassandra turns to her mother for help – in turn shedding some light on her family's secret history and revealing things that she never thought possible.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 1, 2024
It should have been just another ordinary day for Cassandra. except it just isn’t going to be. She’s changed and waking up a futa is a real problem. Seeing a doctor doesn’t help and when her mother reveals the truth and what it all means, there isn’t a way to avoid what’s coming next.
The work is a short erotic hot flash story with a futa theme at the centre and a bit of a succubus theme around the edges. It’s very much focused on the aftermath of Cassandra’s transformation, the thoughts and urges that come from being a futa take up most of the storytelling.
The erotica has rather tepid heat with some domination aspects added into the futa sex scenes which are a bit over the top and tend to draw the work away from character development and moving the plot onwards until the closing pages. At the same time the story feels like it’s searching for the next scene and isn’t quite sure how to get there a lot of the time.
It’s not until the last few pages when Cassandra sees her mother Viola and the truth about them both being futa succubi is revealed. There’s a lot of information being revealed in a short few passages and with all of that what her mother has done adds a lot of complexity to Cassandra. As for horns and tails, Viola does transform into having them, but it feels like more of a costume than it being their true forms. It’s this aspect of the work, the history revealed and the how and why of things that was a lot more interesting to me than the erotic scenes where.
Overall this is mainly a futa transformation story with a bit of succubus themes added at the end to tie things together. While that has some interesting moments, there’s not enough of a presence of succubi here overall. Where the story ends leaves the possibility of a follow on story and if that happens it would be nice for there to be more time spent in the story aspects than there was here as there seems to be a lot to explore in the characters.
Two out of five pitchforks.
The work needs another editing pass, the dialogue needs more emotion, the erotica could be slowed down a bit as well. There’s something here that is interesting, but the work reads a bit oddly which makes things a little bit less than thay really should have been.