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The Succubus Who Sucked (eBook)
| The Succubus Who Sucked | |
|---|---|
 The Succubus Who Sucked eBook Cover, written by Dante Feral & Jack Parvo | |
| Author(s) |
Dante Feral Jack Parvo |
| Publisher | Nocturnalia Press |
| Publication date | January 21, 2019 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 15 Pages |
| ASIN | B07MZZV7QB |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
The Succubus Who Sucked is an eBook written by Dante Feral & Jack Parvo. In this work the characters Lilith, Ashtra and Negan are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: The Succubus Who Sucked
- Author: Dante Feral & Jack Parvo
- Published By: Nocturnalia Press
- Length: 15 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07MZZV7QB
- Publishing Date: January 21, 2019
Plot Summary
Thomas, morose in his sickliness and nearly bedridden, bought a magic spell on OccultBid Dot Com that winter for an even one-hundred dollars. It was ridiculous, of course, paying that kind of money for something that was…well, ridiculous. That was the only word he could think of to describe throwing a hundred dollars away on a few arcane words and the promise of an Otherworldly Girlfriend.
"Girlfriend" might not be an apt description. He was paying for a succubus to visit him, an arcane sex slave who would grant all his wishes, no matter how perverse. Not that his tastes were that bizarre. He didn't really want to hurt her, that wasn't his thing, though some mild bondage and playful spanking, like with a nerf bat, for instance, might be a kick. And he wanted to try anal.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on February 22, 2019
Spells found on the internet can’t be real of course. However, sometimes they are and they come with a price. Thomas takes a gamble, but finds that Lilith, Ashtra and Negan aren’t exactly what they seem to be.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash with really very little heat overall. That’s mostly because of how the story is written, the rather single-minded focus of the characters, and how the dialogue doesn’t really have a lot of emotion to it.
The succubi of the work, Lilith, Ashtra and Negan, are rather one-dimensional sex objects, which makes them a bit disappointing as succubi. There’s next to no real use of their powers as succubi through the erotica as well. It’s only in the past page where their more demonic natures appear and even that is glossed over for the rush to the ending and how disappointing that is.
It’s not a love story by any means, nor can it be said to e a story with depth to it as well. It’s a story with one purpose, to get the main character into the clutches of the succubi and then show what fate awaits him.
Two out of five pitchforks.
The ending was telegraphed quite early in the story and really, it’s more a jump scare to a scene of horror than anything else. It’s a shame that the succubi were not developed, that the story didn’t give their side of things until the very end. Perhaps what’s missing is a reason to care about all of the characters as they are rather two-dimensional at best.