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One Night With A Succubus (eBook II)
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One Night With A Succubus is an eBook written by Joselyn Jenny. In this work one the character Jocelyn is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: One Night With A Succubus
- Author: Joselyn Jenny
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 11 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07NDLXM95
- Publishing Date: February 4, 2019
Plot Summary
He goes home with a really sexy woman from the club but he doesn't know she's the devil's bride. Will he survive it?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 3, 2019
Sometimes you get lucky, and sometimes you really don’t know how lucky you are. It’s one thing to become intimate with a sex goddess, it’s another thing entirely when she’s a succubus and she wants everything you have.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash story which really comes to a single scene of seduction and then falls into an erotic succubus scene. Overall, the heat is a bit muted, the characters are a little paper thin as well. More an adult movie level of heat than anything else, it’s what bookends the erotica that I thought was the most interesting part.
Jocelyn. the succubus of the story, is very much a sex goddess in her human form, the main character can’t resist her at all. Much of that comes through with a bit of succubus mind control and a lot of domination over him. Her form with horns and tail is a bit darker, and in time it’s clear that she has an evil streak in her. But that’s not stereotypically so. Jocelyn is more enamoured with sex, and the main character. It’s a shame really that the story didn’t explore that as far as it really should have.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The work closes in an interesting place, with something of a note that left me wondering what might come next. With that said, the work really needed another editing pass to clean up the narrative and dialogue as well as a scattering of spelling mistakes. The idea is there, as are the characters. It’s just that the story didn’t quote make things happen in the best way possible.
External Links
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available