Partying with the Frat (eBook)
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| Partying with the Frat | |
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 Partying with the Frat eBook Cover, written by Monique Reyer | |
| Author(s) | Monique Reyer |
| Series | Succubus Journals |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | April 22, 2015 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 17 Pages |
| ASIN | B00WL0WNVQ |
| Followed by | Sorority Shenanigans |
Partying with the Frat is an eBook written by Monique Reyer. It is the first work in the Succubus Journals series by this author. In this work the character Leisha is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Partying with the Frat
- Author: Monique Reyer
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 17 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00WL0WNVQ
- Publishing Date: April 22, 2015
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- Sorority Shenanigans
- Sorority Shaming
- Partying with the Frat
- The Fraternity Bundle
- The Sorority Bundle
- The Succubus Journals Books 1-4
Plot Summary
Hey there. My name's Leisha; I'm a succubus, a demon from Hell and a primal embodiment of lust and sex. I'm currently contracted to the most powerful warlock on the planet, and he likes to send me out on missions. My current mission is to...get someone into a fraternity by "partying" with all the members?
What? That's a little beneath me, don't you think? Oh well. Gosh, I wonder how I could ever possibly manage to survive having to "party" with all those strong, virile, gorgeous college guys? Le sigh.
Betcha they'll be nearly out of control and want to do me every which way at once. If they're like most of the guys I party with, they'll probably want to make a donation on my face too. And there's a whole bunch of them, so I'll probably need to make extra bodies just to keep up!
Yum. This is gonna be great!
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on June 2, 2015
The summaries are told in the voice of the main character of the series, a succubus named Leisha who has one of the most odd personalities for a succubus that I have read in some time. Beyond that, some of her powers aren’t what are usually seen in succubi, and that makes her a unique character.
I liked her more when she was telling her story, pieces of her past, who summoned her and so on, more than when she was having her way with various students at a college campus. Some of the flashes are, to be honest, rather repetitive, rushed, and sometimes there isn’t much in the way of story to hold those parts of the series together.
Leisha isn’t stereotypically evil, not by any means, and there are several points in the series where she cares about others, what happens to them. She teaches lessons to some, gives others some needed boosts in their self-image and, most interesting of all, she doesn’t want to do others harm. She’d rather have fun, be fun, and enjoy sex for the sake of it than in doing something evil through sex.
There is a lot of internal monologue as Leisha learns about those she is sent to teach lessons to, how she relates to the one that summoned her, and, as well, one specific mortal that she has a particular like for. It makes her a much more interesting and better character and in being so makes the series that much better.
The problem comes through the dialog, which reads a bit odd, some of the actions taken by others in the work, which just makes them look foolish, stupid and most of all, stereotypes the male characters into thinking about sex for the most part and then takes the female characters and twists them in different ways before the series is done.
By the end of the series, there really isn’t anything in the way of a conclusion to speak of, there’s quite a few plots left unfinished, actions left to play out, and in some cases, the results of what Leisha did could lead to more problems. Still, none of this really is played out to the end.
The focus of the series is all of the erotica that revolves around Leisha of all kinds. Just about anything goes with her, and usually does. But having most of the series being focused on that, the short moments when some character development begins, some questions are answered, isn’t told as well as if could be in the rush to get to the next piece of erotica.
The series could do with some editing, there are a number of word errors and some dialog just sounds wrong. A bit more focus on Leisha herself, to tell more of her story, where she came from, why she is there, and so on would have made this a lot more enjoyable for me.
I’ll give the series as a whole three out of five pitchforks.
There’s promise in Leisha to be sure. The problem is that being drowned by the erotica. A better balance, a little more care and some focus would have made this series more than it came to be.