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A Rough Start (eBook)
| A Rough Start | |
|---|---|
 A Rough Start eBook Cover, written by Molly Rebecca | |
| Author(s) | Molly Rebecca |
| Series | Incubus Life |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | August 27, 2019 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 17 Pages |
| ASIN | B07X1ZFV9K |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
A Rough Start is an eBook written by Molly Rebecca. It is the first work in the Incubus Life series by this author. In this work the character Luke is an Incubus and the characters Nikki, Sam, Lena and Claire are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: A Rough Start
- Author: Molly Rebecca
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 17 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07X1ZFV9K
- Publishing Date: August 27, 2019
Plot Summary
What happens when you learn the hard way you're an Incubus, a demon that can only happily exist with a steady supply of carnal delights? If you're Luke, you get moved into a house with four Succubi, demons who require carnal pleasure just to live, period. It's a quick introduction to a new life for the young and inexperienced Luke, but thanks to his newly developed Incubus traits, he's up to the task. Hopefully. There's only one way to find out, and it's going to be a rough start.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 10, 2019
Luke’s problems only became weirder with learning he is an incubus, and it is even more so when he has to move in with a collective of succubi that have certain needs. Perhaps they’ll get along, at least long enough to see what the future might hold.
The wark is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash that mainly sets up this story universe before pushing the main character into the arms of a succubus and nature takes its course. It’s cute and fun in an anime sort of way, which works with the story tone and narrative fairly well.
The story reads a little oddly however, and it really could use another editing pass for a bit more emotion and passion in the dialogue. Similarly, the world building might have been drawn out a bit more, given a little more detail and as for the erotica, it could have been that little bit hotter too.
Nikki, the main succubus of the story, is a bit dominant, very sexual and overall is lovely and seductive. Her powers and such are a bit shaded, thought her sexual need isn’t by any means. There are also three other succubi roommates mentioned, but there is nothing said about them really, but it leaves quite a lot of interesting things to wonder about.
Three out of five pitchforks.
It’s a cute and awkward story of a young incubus and his first time with a very talented succubus. It’s a shame the series didn’t continue, the three other succubi mentioned are intriguing and I wonder where the series would have gone. I hope that it wouldn’t be the usual harem story, it might have been, but somehow this story felt a little different.