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Cuckold By The Incubus (eBook)
| Cuckold By The Incubus | |
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 Cuckold By The Incubus eBook Cover, written by Johnnie Shadows | |
| Author(s) | Johnnie Shadows |
| Series | 800-Incubus |
| Publisher | Haremverse Books |
| Publication date | December 6, 2019 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 18 Pages |
| ASIN | B082GKMJYT |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Cuckold By The Incubus is an eBook written by Johnnie Shadows. It is the first work in the 800-Incubus series by this author. In this work the character Biac is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Cuckold By The Incubus
- Author: Johnnie Shadows
- Published By: Haremverse Books
- Length: 18 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B082GKMJYT
- Publishing Date: December 6, 2019
Plot Summary
What happens when a sexy blonde calls 800-INCUBUS as a joke and gets a real Incubus. Pamela wanted to try something different and called 800-INCUBUS as a joke only to talk to a real Incubus who will help her turn her husband into a cuckold. Pamela will get more than she bargained for when she turns into a bimbos after being taken by an Incubus in the form of a Black Alpha Male because her husband can't do the job anymore. Why is a Black Alpha Male turning up at the airport? Will Pamela take the become the Incubus bimbo? Yes! Yes, she will! Will her husband watch his naughty wife be taken by a Black Alpha Male? Yes, yes, he will!
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 5, 2020
Pamela wanted a thrill, a bit of revenge on her husband. The phone number was a joke of course, but then it wasn’t. Biac is an incubus and he will teach Pamela her place and with her, her husband will fall as well.
The wark is a very short. what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash story with an incubus theme mixed in. With that said, the erotica is very bland, mainly porn levels of heat with a very domineering incubus character that sucks the life out of what otherwise could have been a very hot story of submission and control.
Biac. the incubus of the work, is very much a one-dimensional character, very over the top in his actions and dialogue as well. He’s less of an incubus than a controlling dominant and the story revolves around his taking of Pamela in every way possible before forcing her husband to succumb to his nature as well.
The writing turns the story into what really feels like a script for a porn movie overall. That’s a shame because there’s really very little in the way of Biac being an incubus, save for mentioning it several times in the story. Beyond that there’s just not all that much to him as an incubus and that’s disappointing.
Setting aside the dialogue and the narrative, there’s opportunities for the story to take a turn towards something really interesting that never happened. One that comes to mind would be Pamela being transformed into a succubus and then domineering her husband as Biac watched or joined in. That would have added a lot here and I wonder about that.
One and a half out of five pitchforks.
The concept of the story, and the series that was supposed to follow from here, could have been really interesting. The problem, for me at least, was the porn movie levels of dialogue and sex scenes that really didn’t do anything for me. It might well make for a good porn movie, but as an incubus story it left a lot to be desired.
External Links
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available