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Dark Love: Lilith Mystery (eBook)
| Dark Love: Lilith Mystery | |
|---|---|
 Dark Love: Lilith Mystery eBook Cover, written by Kennedy Best | |
| Author(s) | Kennedy Best |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | September 30, 2019 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 61 Pages |
| ASIN | B07YLWGCPQ |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
For other uses of the word Lilith, see Lilith (disambiguation).
Dark Love: Lilith Mystery is an eBook written by Kennedy Best. In this work the queen of the demons Lilith appears.
Overview
- Title: Dark Love: Lilith Mystery
- Author: Kennedy Best
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 61 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07YLWGCPQ
- Publishing Date: September 30, 2019
Plot Summary
A story about two teenagers created by Lilith, (The mother of all evil) to prevent the darkness from spreading into the world but Damien, currently the leader of Hell tries to hunt them down and kill them because they are the only obstacles standing between him and the Hell he want's to unleash on Earth. Darkness fights darkness for a light to come.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on October 13, 2019
Lilith set a seed of hope within two teenagers and set them on Earth towards a goal of light. But darkness craves and if they are unwary, the darkest of things will claim them and the hope awaiting them.
The work is a fantasy adventure with interesting world building, characters as well. But it is also so dearly dark overall, and at the same time there’s an undercurrent of hopelessness that tears at the main characters as the darkness rushes towards them.
The single largest issue with this work is the editing. There are far too many spelling mistakes, misused words, and at times the sentences don’t make sense as the words just don’t fit properly.
Lilith, who is described as the Queen of all Evil, isn’t stereotypical by any means. She’s interesting, adds an odd quirkiness too the story as well. More of a means to shade information dumps a bit, her tone and presence I thought was well done.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The work is a bit odd and more than a little scattered as well. It really needs another editing pass to clean up the dialogue and make the story flow better. The story, and Lilith herself, are a very captivating read, but I think this could have been a lot better with a little more time to develop along the way.