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Deep Sea Incubus (eBook)
| Deep Sea Incubus | |
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 Deep Sea Incubus eBook Cover, written by Carmelita Conley | |
| Author(s) | Carmelita Conley |
| Publisher | Smashwords |
| Publication date | March 26, 2020 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 27 Pages |
| ISBN | 9781370655472 |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Deep Sea Incubus is an eBook written by Carmelita Conley. In this work the character Mervyn is a kind of underwater Incubus creature.
Overview
- Title: Deep Sea Incubus
- Author: Carmelita Conley
- Published By: Smashwords
- Length: 27 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: 9781370655472
- Publishing Date: March 26, 2020
Plot Summary
Deep in the sea, a merhuman named Sira gets captured by a monstrous sorcerer. Along with her new companion Vencel, she is sent out by the sorcerer to hunt down a dangerous incubus. Along the way, Sira experiences more sexual encounters than she expected.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 3, 2020
Sira was told not to swim into the seaweed at dark and she discovers the reason why that is. Trapped and given a quest for her and Vencel to complete or die, there’s little choice for either pf them. Perhaps even less so than they bot realize.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash with a bit of an adventure mixed into things. Very quick paced, the story rushes through events, the erotica and the development of the story to get to the last page and it’s a bit of a shame that happened. There’s an interesting mythos being built, but it’s glossed over unfortunately.
The erotica has some heat, though it is muted through much of the story and otherwise it sort of becomes a means to an end for the story as a whole eventually. The characters are all intriguing, and it would have been nice to tell more about them, to develop all of them far more than was.
The incubus of the work, Mervyn, is a unique sort of incubus, being something of a squid creature whose ink drives others into lust. Perhaps more accurately called a creature of sex, they are interesting, but like the other characters, it’s a shame that who they were and what exactly an incubus in this underwater world is, is a question that really isn’t answered.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The story closes in a way that is, really, expected from early on and even so how that happens is a bit odd. As for the closing otherwise, the ending felt very rushed and while it cleared up some threads, it felt clunky and not really as meaningful as it might have been.