On November 27th, 2022, the 8,000th article was added to the SuccuWiki!
Demonic Desires: Erotic Fantasy (eBook)
| Demonic Desires: Erotic Fantasy | |
|---|---|
 Demonic Desires: Erotic Fantasy eBook Cover, written by Timothy Kincaid | |
| Author(s) | Timothy Kincaid |
| Series | Taboo Tantalizing Tales |
| Publisher | VantaBlack Press |
| Publication date | November 27, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 35 Pages |
| ASIN | B0CP4JFNCY |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Demonic Desires: Erotic Fantasy is an eBook written by Timothy Kincaid. It is the sixteenth work in the Taboo Tantalizing Tales series by this author. In this work the character Lilith is a Succubus and the character Opius is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Demonic Desires: Erotic Fantasy
- Author: Timothy Kincaid
- Published By: VantaBlack Press
- Length: 35 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0CP4JFNCY
- Publishing Date: November 27, 2023
Plot Summary
The demented deeds of the Succubus called Lilith and her love affair with her own creation. The Incubus she so named Opius. She is his queen whom he bends the knee to feed her insatiable need for the seminal fluid of male humanoids. He is the liege Lilith had spent a century looking for but her old habits are hard to break. These are their tales of Demonic Desires.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 3, 2024
Need can bring one to create a desire to fill the void within. Lilith’s need brought Opius and what that begot made other needs and desires be unending. It isn’t the craving that consumes them both, it’s what a choice made inevitably leads to.
The work is something of a stream of consciousness within which the two main characters, Lilith and Opius, encounter each other and find others to add to the mixture between them. While this is a work of erotica, the way in which the story is told, the dialog and how things happen doesn’t really build heat much more than a tepid level, which was a shame.
The work is made up of a series of vignettes which are connected through Lilith at some points, but mainly follows Opius through his sexual encounters. There’s really very little told about Lilith, save for a scattered bit of story at the beginning. As for Opius, once transformed, he is a means to the erotica and doesn’t evolve as much as he might have.
It’s a shame that the work didn’t have more time spent in developing their relationship, telling of what each needs. There’s a few points here and there were a scene offers a mean to explore the characters more but really doesn’t.
It’s a different sort of story as a whole which I found a bit difficult to enjoy. It’s a shame that so little time was spent with Lilith, that her story wasn’t really explored. Perhaps that’s the missing part of the story, a way to care about both of the main characters and become invested in them. As things are, I was expecting something a bit different than what this work is.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work ends on a note that, honestly, I wish had been explored. It’s a turning point for Opius, a moment for Lilith to be confronted and the truth be told. Perhaps another handful of pages to close the story of these characters would have added more to the work and given a satisfying conclusion.