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Desires Unleashed (eBook)
| Desires Unleashed | |
|---|---|
 Desires Unleashed eBook Cover, written by Skylar Succubus | |
| Author(s) | Skylar Succubus |
| Series | Succubus Transformations |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | November 23, 2022 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 23 Pages |
| ASIN | B0BN8ZZ7M6 |
| Preceded by | The Power of Lust |
| Followed by | Carmen Corrupted |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Desires Unleashed is an eBook written by Skylar Succubus. It is the second work in the Succubus Transformations series by this author. In this work the character Carmen is transformed into being a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Desires Unleashed
- Author: Skylar Succubus
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 23 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BN8ZZ7M6
- Publishing Date: November 23, 2022
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
Carmen is tired of being overlooked. At work and in her dating life. It seems every guy she meets only talks to her to get info about her more busty and curvaceous friend Yasmine. At work the only women getting promoted are the one's doing 'overtime' under the bosses desk. It's an unfair world for the more shy and reserved Carmen and she's fed up with it. So when a mysterious man offers her a way to take the opportunities she wants she is desperate enough to accept it.
She doubts that a new necklace will really make an impact but it's not like it could make things any worse. To her immense surprise though it does exactly what the man said it would do. She suddenly finds herself becoming irresistible to everyone guy meets! The more lustful they become the more power she gains over them. Her powers soon become so strong that even the women at the office begin fawning over her. Eager to please her in every way they can think of.
What Carmen soon begins to realise though is that the necklace isn't just helping her. It's corrupting her too. As it collects more lust and she gains more control over others the more she craves the power. Seducing anyone who has something she wants is becoming impossible to resist as her body itself begins to change into the perfect succubus. Can she break free of the spell she is under before it consumes her? Or maybe there is a different ending for her altogether...
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 15, 2023
Carmen is falling under the influence of the necklace she has taken possession of. At the same time it seems that the necklace has taken possession of her mind and body to do its bidding. Carmen is controlling the puppets around her, but for how long?
The story continues immediately after the prior work with Carmen using her new found powers to ensnare others and make them do her bidding. Overall that’s mainly a lot of mind control mixed with some physical changes driven by the powers which Carmen now possesses. That said, there still isn’t any actual signs of her becoming a succubus or the suggestion that there is one involved. The story simply continues with a series of sex scenes overall with really not that much actual progression in the story.
The erotica has very little heat overall, much of that coming from the fall of others to Carmen and what happens after that. It’s a bit rote, the encounters just don’t have the heat that I would have expected. The story getting stuck in sex scene after scene just leaves me impatient for the story to get to Carmen’s transformation and where that takes her.
It’s in that transformation where I wonder what will be. Will she go full on stereotypical succubus with red skin, hooves and all? Might she be possessed by whatever resides in the pendant she wears? Perhaps Carmen undergoes a personality change along with the physical transformation. All of these possibilities are a lot more interesting than the story so far with the focus on the sex alone.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
Still waiting for the succubus story to actually begin and where that takes Carmen. Dominance and control are interesting, but this just isn’t a succubus story yet. Hopefully the next part of the series will turn the corner into that theme.