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Incubus Love (eBook)
| Incubus Love | |
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 Incubus Love eBook Cover, written by Tami Lima | |
| Author(s) | Tami Lima |
| Series | Monster Love: Erotic Shorts Stories |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | March 16, 2024 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 65 Pages |
| ASIN | B0CW5N3622 |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Incubus Love is an eBook written by Tami Lima. It is a work in the Monster Love: Erotic Shorts Stories series by this author. In this work the character Akin is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Incubus Love
- Author: Tami Lima
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 65 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0CW5N3622
- Publishing Date: March 16, 2024
Plot Summary
I was devastated by my boyfriend's betrayal, so I decided to satisfy myself by going to a special place... what I didn't expect was that from then on my life would turn upside down with three incubus in love with me!
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 29, 2024
Love lost can sometimes make for choices which make sense only to the one choosing. If the one you loved does not, then perhaps an incubus will give what is desired.
The work is a mixture of anime, or hentai-like story ideas which it told from the perspective of the reader. Through the incubus a series of role-plays are revealed which fall into erotic vignettes along the way. The erotica is very tepid, close to being adult movie heat and overall lacks heat and passion.
Written very oddly, for example there are placeholders for the reader to insert their names that are very clunky, which takes one out of the story. The dialogue reads something like translated English at times, which adds to the overall oddity. The story also tends to go in circles for a while before setting off to the plot and get somewhere which just caused me to flip pages on occasion as well.
Akin, the incubus of the story is as odd as the rest of the book. His first appearance just was so very odd and disturbing, and with each shift in the role he plays, it becomes more so. There’s really very little of him being an incubus, save for the shapeshifting that is. He. much like the other characters in the story, is very two-dimensional and needed to be fleshed out more.
That’s really the overall issue here, this work needs to be reconsidered and revised to make it a better read with better characters and more passionate story.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work needs some more editing, both in the narrative and the dialogue. It reads very flat, there’s no real emotion and overall the story feels like something between a choose your own adventure and a movie script. There’s a lot to be desired as a whole, most of that being desire itself.