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My Roommate's Magic Words (eBook)
| My Roommate's Magic Words | |
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 My Roommate's Magic Words eBook Cover, written by Max Mesmer | |
| Author(s) | Max Mesmer |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | August 28, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 67 Pages |
| ASIN | B0CGVXX6F5 |
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My Roommate's Magic Words is an eBook written by Max Mesmer. In this work the character Krystal is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: My Roommate's Magic Words
- Author: Max Mesmer
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 67 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0CGVXX6F5
- Publishing Date: August 28, 2023
Plot Summary
Harry had never really thought about his roommate Gabrielle the way he thought about other girls. She was a petite, dark-haired 'goth girl' who treated him more like her clean up crew than a friend or roommate. Instead she devoted all her attention to the 'Magic Club' she was in, while he tried his best to nod along with a straight face whenever she tried to talk to him about it.
One fateful day though he came across another pack of 'magic cards' she had left sitting on the counter and Harry decided enough was enough. He was tired of cleaning her dishes and sorting her laundry. He was tired of being taken advantage of because he was too much of a 'nice guy' to stand up to her. He marched into her room and threw down the cards ready to finally confront her...
Only what he found wasn't the short, mean-spirited roommate he was used to. Instead he found a tall, athletic looking blonde with dazzling blue eyes wearing a shirt so small it barely covered her impressive assets.
It turned out that Magic was real after all and Harry's angry roommate had somehow turned herself into a busty blonde bimbo!
Would Harry be able to change her back to who she was? Or will he be able to make a deal with his roommate to see more of the eager Britney?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 23, 2024
Harry has a problem with his roommate and it’s one that comes to a head with him barging into her room and finding that the goth girl he expected isn’t there. But a blonde bimbo is and she has a story to tell him. It’s said you reap what you sow and for Harry, he’s going to find that Britney will be making up for everything that Gabrielle has done and more.
The work is a mixture of magic, bimbo transformation and a bit of dominance and submission around the edges between the characters. There is a good deal of world building as well as character development as the story unfolds that I thought was really well done. It’s something of a split story in that there’s the part between Harry and Gabrielle, which has one tone, and then Harry and Britney which develops their characters and the story as a whole in another direction.
The erotica focuses on Harry and Britney, who is very much Harry’s dream girl in every way possible. Through that magical transformation, Britney is something between a bimbo and a sex toy with her main thought being how she can do whatever Harry wants. This creates some cute moments and the erotic entanglements are quite fun too.
About two-thirds through the story, the pair go out and meet Krystal, who is the succubus of the work. She isn’t at all stereotypical, it’s clearly said that succubi in this story universe are all about the sex and feed from that, which was a mice turn to see. She’s very much a sexual creature and knows what Harry wants and is very much into being part of that.
There’s no hint of horns or a tail with Krystal, but there’s a very strong dominant streak in her personality that worked well for her. I also thought that the powers she did display mixed with the story and the other characters really well. The erotic scenes with her were a lot of fun and I thought she was a good addition to the story overall.
However it’s very much a bimbo transformation story with a succubus as a minor character that comes along for the ride. It’s a shame that there really isn’t a lot told about Krystal, she’s interesting and with her comes the possibility for other things to happen. Perhaps some mind control, perhaps something else. She just feels a little underused as a character which is a shame.
Three out of five pitchforks.
Where the story ends leaves a bit to be desired. There’s a massive plot hole that isn’t resolved. There’s a character that seems to have been pushed aside for the sake of the sex in the story. That said, there’s also the possibility of things going a bit wrong in a way that leaves Harry with a larger problem and that idea amuses me.