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Punished by the Succubus (eBook)
| Punished by the Succubus | |
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 Punished by the Succubus eBook Cover, written by Elle Archambeau | |
| Author(s) | Elle Archambeau |
| Publisher | Smashwords |
| Publication date | November 2, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 10 Pages |
| ISBN | None |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Punished by the Succubus is an eBook written by Elle Archambeau. In this work the character Jehilith is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Punished by the Succubus
- Author: Elle Archambeau
- Published By: Smashwords
- Length: 10 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: 'None
- Publishing Date: November 2, 2023
Plot Summary
She was hoping to release her inner femme fatale, but instead she summoned a succubus who doesn't take no for an answer! In this spicy short story, Abbie learns first-hand the dangers of not being careful what she wishes for.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 17, 2024
Abbie is lost within herself, not able to find the person she wants to be through who she is. A book offered leads to Abbie to encounter Jehilith who has very explicit plans.
The work is a very short piece of hot flash erotica which has a bit of a succubus theme around the edges of a transformation and some mind control aspects. There’s also a bit of domination and submission as well to tie everything together.
Being as short as it is, there’s really not a lot of time for character development or plot before the story turns directly into a quick encounter for Abbie and a number of men on a bus. The heat comes from their domination of her, and Jehilith, the succubus of the work taunting and demanding she submit fully.
Jehilith, the succubus of the work, is never seen or described well. She’s a shadow, a voice in Abbie’s mind and really not much else. That said, her personality is very dominant, it feels like there is a lot of story to be told about her as well. It’s particularly the reveal at the end of the work that brought me to pause and wonder why this story turned out as it did. The story feels very incomplete with how things developed and where Abbie winds up at the close.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The work needs a follow on if for no other reason than to bring Jehilith fully in the story. Perhaps that will happen, I really do hope that it does as there feels like so much story still to be told.