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Ravaged by the Succubus (eBook II)
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Ravaged by the Succubus is an eBook written by Jezebel Rose. In this work the character Lauren is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Ravaged by the Succubus
- Author: Jezebel Rose
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 12 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B08WJHCYK6
- Publishing Date: February 11, 2021
Plot Summary
Whilst video-gaming, Ben meets Lauren online. She’s cute, funny, and has an exceptionally attractive voice. He then realises that she really turns him on, so he decides to take the plunge and meet up with her in person. To his surprise, she’s perfectly normal, super pretty, and really into him... or at least, that’s how it seems, until she confesses her naughty little secret. ‘’I’m a succubus,’’ she tells him, whispering it into his ear. ‘’... And need a lot of cum to sustain myself.’’ Luckily for her, Ben’s more than into it, and agrees to ‘sustain’ Lauren’s appetite right then and there!
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 30, 2021
A chance taken brings Ben to meet Lauren and she’s so much more than he expected her to be. Finding out she is a succubus as well just makes things that much more amazing and, perhaps, they are what each there needs most of all.
The wark is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash that’s really not so focused on the erotica as it is about the two characters of the story trying to figure each other out. Both are so very lost, trying to come to terms with what they both want and when they finally do, it’s adorably cute most of all.
Lauren, the succubus of the story, isn’t evil by any means, she does have needs and that drives her side of the story in an interesting way. There’s really only her word that she is a succubus for the most part, which adds a bit of mystery to her that I did like a lot. But the story is so very short and so her succubus nature really isn’t explored and I wish there had been as much about her as was told about Ben.
Three out of five pitchforks.
So very awkward in the storytelling, the characters and overall it reads as if the author was a little bit lost as they were putting the pieces together. That said, the characters are just a lot of fun being so awkward and that worked overall. Still, this is very much a flash of a story and honestly I would have liked to see more story, more told about both and it’s a shame that never happened.
External Links
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available