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Revenge on the Sleeping Succubus (eBook)
| Revenge on the Sleeping Succubus | |
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 Revenge on the Sleeping Succubus eBook Cover, written by Alexander Wonderland | |
| Author(s) | Alexander Wonderland |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | January 22, 2022 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 5 Pages |
| ASIN | B09QZX6MBG |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Revenge on the Sleeping Succubus is an eBook written by Alexander Wonderland. In this work one of the main characters is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Revenge on the Sleeping Succubus
- Author: Alexander Wonderland
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 5 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B09QZX6MBG
- Publishing Date: January 22, 2022
Plot Summary
Ebarin the wizard loses his life force to a succubus and ends up with the body of an old man. In order to regain his youthful body he finds the succubus during the daytime, when demons are asleep and vulnerable.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 1, 2022
Ebarin fell to the powers of a succubus, she taking what he had and leaving him frail. But revenge is a powerful thing to drive oneself onwards. Finding the succubus, he intends to reclaim what she took in the same way she did from him.
The work is very short, what I tend to call a pamphlet in length, as such there’s really very little storytelling, even less in the way of heat in the erotica as well. It’s an idea, something of a handful of scenes pasted together rather roughly.
The writing is very scattered and the work really needs another editing pass to make the story read better than it does. Beyond that, the characters are both very two-dimensional and not that investing overall.
The succubus of the work, who is never named, doesn’t do anything other than be at Ebarin’s mercy which is supposed to give heat to the erotic scene that unfolds. But she never says a word, isn’t active in the story, and just exists and nothing more.
The work is very short and while the idea is interesting, there’s no real story or character development. It’s not that much of a hot flash, it’s not that much of a succubus story either. The author might be well served to take what they have and expand on it. There’s a good story here at the core, it’s just not being told.
One and a half out of five pitchforks.
It’s really a story with a bland sex scene and a bit of a dominance theme. There is a succubus, but she’s not really in the story so much as being part of the scenery. This could have been something, the author just didn’t take the idea and make something of it.