Succubi Gone Wild: Madison (eBook)

Succubi Gone Wild: Madison
Succubi Gone Wild: Madison eBook Cover, written by Lexi Jordan
Author(s)	Lexi Jordan
Publisher	Amazon Digital Services Smashwords
Publication date	July 25, 2017
Media type	eBook
Length	25 Pages
ISBN	9781370090112
ASIN	B0748LMB1K

For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).

Succubi Gone Wild: Madison is an eBook written by Lexi Jordan. In this work the character Madison is a Succubus.

Overview

• Title: Succubi Gone Wild: Madison
• Author: Lexi Jordan
• Published By: Amazon Digital Services & Smashwords
• Length: 25 Pages
• Format: eBook
• ASIN: B0748LMB1K
• IBSN: 9781370090112
• Publishing Date: July 25, 2017

Plot Summary

When three friends cast a spell to obtain eternal youth and beauty, their wish is granted. But there's a cost. They must indulge in their deepest desires or starve to death no matter how dark those desires might be.

Madison had everything she wanted in life; wealth, beauty, popularity. When one of her best friends wanted to do a spell, she joined in thinking it was silly, slumber party nonsense. Little did she know that her life would change forever. Cursed with a hunger she can't control, she turns to the person she trusts most in the world, her step-brother, Logan. But will the darkness inside her lead her to harm those she cares about the most?

Book Review

The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on September 3, 2017

Madison finds herself roped into trying some magic by a good friend. But while she thought it was a lark, it turns out that they made a deal with the incubus king and now the three of them are succubi. Now Madison’s problem is that she needs something, someone, desperately and when she discovers who that is, the confusion mixed with her needs leaves nothing but a mess behind.

The work is a short hot flash which mainly focuses on Madison as she tries to deal with the changes she is undergoing. The heat comes from three encounters which work well enough, if seemingly being a bit quickly passed over at times.

The work is very short and as such there’s a lot of things that aren’t delved into, explained, or considered. For example, at one point Madison realizes what it means to be a succubus, what her future holds, and in that moment she had a break down over that realization. But rather than spending time giving her character more depth, there’s a rush to move on as her needs overcome her once more.

That, at its core, is the issue with this work. There’s little time spent in developing Madison as a character for the sake of rushing headlong into the next piece of erotica. There’s no time spent in having her learn about being a succubus, nothing told about trying to cope beyond her cravings. Even a reflection of her situation is glossed over and that shouldn’t be. It’s a shame because the storytelling is very good, there’s delightful humour, the characters have some really interesting personalities as well.

The work is less about Madison being a succubus than it is about Madison being tossed into what are, mostly, porn movie sex scenes. As such, the question becomes if it even matters if she is a succubus at times, if that is only an excuse for the erotica to latch onto. The shortness of the work is what causes this issue and I dearly wish the author had spent more time in giving Madison more life than they did. There’s a good start here, but it could be so much better still.

Three and a half out of five pitchforks.

I loved the humour, the storytelling and overall the story just appealed in many ways to me. But there’s a real lack of there being more to the succubus aspects of Madison and her friends than just their needs being fulfilled in any way possible. It’s a shame that there wasn’t more time spent in exploring that aspect of their transformations. It’s a shame that the story really only had one point when all was said and done.

I’d have liked to have similar works about the other two characters who where transformed, what happened to them and how things turned out. Sadly, the work is no longer available and it seems to be unlikely that anything further will come from this.

External Links

• This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available
• This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com - No Longer Available