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Succubus: The First Encounter (eBook)
| Succubus: The First Encounter | |
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 Succubus: The First Encounter eBook Cover, written by Careem Mayfield | |
| Author(s) | Careem Mayfield |
| Publisher |
Amazon Digital Services Smashwords |
| Publication date | October 10, 2021 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 174 Pages |
| ISBN | 9781005044343 |
| ASIN | B09J584ZM2 |
| Followed by | Succubus: The Second Encounter |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Succubus: The First Encounter is an eBook written by Careem Mayfield. It is the first work in the Succubus series by this author. In this work the character Kattahlina is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Succubus: The First Encounter
- Author: Careem Mayfield
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services & Smashwords
- Length: 174 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B09J584ZM2
- ISBN: 9781005044343
- Publishing Date: October 10, 2021
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
Being a handsome, young man and a man of pleasure; Isaiah’s job description is a young, male escort, until Isaiah meets the girl of his dreams, Kattahlina, who appears to be a vestal, salaciously riding Isaiah’s soul to her next destination. For Isaiah, life takes a sudden turn for the worst when, his female clients start to end up dead after having visited them for a session. The enigma sets in and the question becomes, who is killing Isaiah's clients? While being investigated by two detectives, Harthorne and Flamingo, the three of them team up with a gypsy, to solve the enigma of murders and bring the mendacious Kattahlina out of Isaiah's soul. Meticulously, the two detectives, Isaiah and the gypsy, Lou-Bell, must hurry and make chaste of Isaiah's soul because it lays perrill.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 14, 2022
Isaiah is young as desired by many as he lives his life. An encounter with Kattahlina brings him into contact with a dangerous spirit who needs him and jealousy holds him. Some paths lead to pain, others to loss and he well many find the loss of everything isn’t worth the cost.
The work is a mystery with some erotic moments around the edges that push the story and the charactrers towards the climax. It’s somewhat confusing at times, but overall the conflicts and challenges that Isaiah deals with are quite the telling read.
The succubus of the work, Kattahlina, isn’t in the story as much as I’d have liked her to be. The story dances around her, but she’s more of a thought than physically part of the story as a whole. Considering her nature, that does make sense and works well overall.
The work needs some editing however. It reads odd at times, the author seems to be groping for descriptive words, some words aren’t right and there are moments when the narration and the dialogue just reads somehow oddly.
Three out of five pitchforks.
It’s a bit odd of a story, it isn’t really overall a succubus one either, even as Kattahlina hints at what she is and what she can do. Scattered at times, a bit of a difficult read at times because of the editing, it offers something to consider, but it wasn’t really all it could be.
External Links
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available
- This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com