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Succubus Sins Chapter 0: The Name's Sinclair (eBook)
| Succubus Sins Chapter 0: The Name's Sinclair | |
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 Succubus Sins Chapter 0: The Name's Sinclair eBook Cover, written by Jason J. Honz | |
| Author(s) | Jason J. Honz |
| Series | Succubus Sins |
| Publisher | Alexis B. Foyer |
| Publication date | February 23, 2017 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 16 Pages |
| ISBN | 9781370119950 |
| Followed by | Succubus Sins Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Succubus Sins Chapter 0: The Name's Sinclair is an eBook written by Jason J. Honz. It is the first work in the Succubus Sins series by this author. In this work the characters Sinclair and Maze are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: Succubus Sins Chapter 0: The Name's Sinclair
- Author: Jason J. Honz
- Published By: Alexis B. Foyer
- Length: 16 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: 9781370119950
- Publishing Date: February 23, 2017
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- Succubus Sins Chapter 1: Home Sweet Home
- Succubus Sins Chapter 2: Witch Doctor
- Succubus Sins Chapter 3: Public Practice
Plot Summary
Succubus Sins follows the life of a succubus by the name of Sinclair, who’s just moved in with her long-time succubus friend, Maze, in a new town. She’s ready to fuck, feed, and fight, if she has to, to her heart’s content.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on February 26, 2017
Sinclair is travelling to meet her fellow succubus Maze and along the way a stewardess discovers the hungers of a succubus needing a meal. Sometimes need is everything and in the case of Sinclair, her needs are all that matters.
The work is a hot flash with a hentai focus to the erotica. As such, the story doesn’t spend a lot of time telling a story or setting up a plot than it does getting Sinclair and her morsel together and telling about what happens next. There’s a real rush from the opening page to get into the story, dropping some thoughts about Sinclair, then moving directly into her need to feed.
Beyond the over-the-top scene, which borders into the realm of impossibly, and yes I realize this is a work of hentai more than anything else, I just couldn’t quite manage to get past the descriptions of what happens to the stewardess. I also didn’t really kind Sinclair’s dominant streak and attitude that attractive either. There’s a different between being dominant and being abusive and it feels like Sinclair likes the abuse more than the domination. That’s a character trait, of course, and perhaps in time there’ll be a reflection as to why she is the way she is.
While much of the scene didn’t have heat for me, what really brought me up short was how it ended. The encounter sort of hits a brick wall and comes to a stop, leaving a lot of questions behind, not the least of which was how Sinclair extracted herself from the position she put herself into. The logic of the scene just didn’t work for me as a result. Perhaps the rushing through it all, the overwhelming force that Sinclair uses is part of the problem.
All that said, the work needs an editing pass if for no other reason than to slow the story down. Perhaps giving Sinclair some more time for self-reflection would help too. Taking some time to allow for some sort of seduction rather than how things unfolded would be good as well. Succubi are, after all, supposed to draw their prey to them, be seductive and be desired. It was hard to find that within Sinclair as she is.
The concept I think is interesting, Sinclair should be a unique succubus, given the hints the author gives that beginning of the work. Some of the themes the author suggests that will appear in future chapters, such as vore, don’t particularly interest me, but if there’s more of a story outside of the erotica, that would attract me further. As things are told so far, I just couldn’t find my way into the story and that was disappointing as I really wanted to.
Two out of five pitchforks.
There’s a bit too much hentai-level abuse and dominance for my particular taste so far. Beyond that, Sinclair’s personality seems really one-dimensional and I really would like to see that change into something more than that. Now, the next chapter might draw the other succubus of the series, Maze, into the picture and she could add a lot if she’s something more than what Sinclair’s shown herself to be.
Sex alone isn’t really all that much of a story, and so far that sex has been really not that interesting so far. The thing is, there’s a hint of a story floating around Sinclair, and I’d like to see where that goes. She’s not going to be nice, there’s no question of that, but she could be less of a force of will and more of a seductress.
Getting to the story beyond the sex scenes I think will be the difference here.