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The Devil Herself (eBook)
| The Devil Herself | |
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 The Devil Herself eBook Cover, written by Celeste Starrfield | |
| Author(s) | Celeste Starrfield |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | September 27, 2019 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 31 Pages |
| ASIN | B07YJ586ZK |
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The Devil Herself is an eBook written by Celeste Starrfield. In this work the character Molly is transformed into being a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: The Devil Herself
- Author: Celeste Starrfield
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 31 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07YJ586ZK
- Publishing Date: September 27, 2019
Plot Summary
Molly is in love with her roommate and closest friend, Allison. With the benefit of becoming one with the devil she is finally able to live out her wildest, demonic fantasies with Allison. The two return to hell and begin to reign the Under-verse together.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on October 18, 2019
Molly is in love, but Allison couldn’t possibly love her back. But the Devil is always listening and makes Molly an offer she can’t resist. Transformed, and able to have anything she wants, there is really only one soul that matters.
The work is an erotic hot flash with a fantasy theme and quite a lot of futa aspects to it. the heat is very much over the top, the story is in far too much of a rush as well. Another editing pass to clean up the dialogue and to slow the story down a little would have made this a better read in spite of some of the scenes. There’s a bit of a horror edge at points, from time to time the story sort of falls into being lost and trying to find the next part of the story as well as a result.
Molly, the main character, is possessed and transformed into something close to a succubus but with the power of the Devil. She is very much a creature of sex and seduction, there is a fair bit of transformation and futa aspects that come into the story as well. She is interesting, as a character idea, but there’s just not quite enough time spent in fleshing her out as much as there could have been.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The work closes with the suggestion there would be a work to follow, but that never happened. With that said, it is a complete story on its own, if a bit scattered and dearly in too much of a rush. The idea is interesting, the characters are unique, but the story needed more time to develop and less of a rush to get to the erotica.