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The Succubus Babysitter (eBook)
| The Succubus Babysitter | |
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 The Succubus Babysitter eBook Cover, written by Succumb To Me | |
| Author(s) | Succumb To Me |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | June 5, 2021 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 37 Pages |
| ASIN | B096QTF8XY |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
The Succubus Babysitter is an eBook written by Succumb To Me. In this work the character Selene is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: The Succubus Babysitter
- Author: Succumb To Me
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 37 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B096QTF8XY
- Publishing Date: June 5, 2021
Plot Summary
Thomas Reynolds is an overworked programmer who desperately needs a vacation, unfortunately he receives an email from his boss with yet another project that he has to take care of as soon as possible. His wife is out of town, so he calls an overnight baby-sitting service. The babysitter is not what he expected and he begins to suspect that she might be hiding a terrible secret. The Succubus Babysitter is an erotic horror thriller not meant for the faint of heart.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 13, 2021
Tom is caught between a rock and a hard place when his job goes sideways and his wife isn’t home to look after their son. But a babysitter would solve the issue his wife explains and when the babysitter appears Tom discovers his hard place is found beside the succubus that has arrived to “help”.
The work is interesting as the majority of the story centers on Selene, the succubus character, as she tempts and seduces Tom into falling into her clutches. It’s a slow building up of heat that I thought was really well done. It’s not rushed or over the top, the means she uses are well described as are Tom’s reactions. As such it was really enjoyable to see how Selene played him through his finally succumbing to her.
The final seduction, and Selene revealing her true form, are as well done. What’s more interesting is her thoughts about why and what she is doing. That was a different twist and it makes what otherwise was a erotic scene that bordered on porn levels of heat, much better than it seemed to be going otherwise.
The writing is quite good, the characters aren’t two dimensional and I liked that the actions had consequences for the characters. The climax I think could have been a bit longer, the heat a bit more. The ending is also a little abrupt for my liking, but does offer something for the future which is positive. But there’s a question in that happening.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
Selene is rather unique as a whole and I liked the storytelling quite a bit. I’d have liked a little less porn in the erotica however. If anything, the seduction Selena creates I’d have liked to see more of. How things end makes this feel like there’s going to be a follow on book and I hope there is.
There’s a lot of plot threads dangling that should be used. I especially wonder about Tom’s wife, there’s a few hints that make me wonder about her and if I’m right, that could take the story towards something a lot more interesting by far.