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The Succubus Bar (eBook)
| The Succubus Bar | |
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 The Succubus Bar Original eBook Cover, written by Jezebel Rose | |
| Author(s) | Jezebel Rose |
| Series | The Succubus Bar |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services, Smashwords |
| Publication date | December 23, 2020 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 11 Pages |
| ISBN | 9781005869533 |
| ASIN | B08R92J5LZ |
| Followed by | The Succubus Bar 2 |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
The Succubus Bar is an eBook written by Jezebel Rose. It is the first work in the Succubus Bar series by this author. In this work several characters are Succubi.
Overview
- Title: The Succubus Bar
- Author: Jezebel Rose
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services & Smashwords
- Length: 11 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B08R92J5LZ
- ISBN: 9781005869533
- Publishing Date: December 23, 2020
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
A young man, Brian, goes into a bar looking for a quick job. The owner, Ava, is a drop-dead gorgeous woman that immediately puts him to the test, but the test isn’t about how good he is at making drinks, but how good his cum tastes. He gets the job, and the owner calls a friend to enjoy the man’s essence as well. Out of nowhere, both the owner and her friend turn out to be far more than Brian thought.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 27, 2021
The first part of the series introduces the main characters Brian and his succubus boss Ava. There’s a fair bit of character development along with the erotica, and overall that works well. I liked Ava’s background, her explanation of what she wanted and how things would work between the two of them. It’s a hot flash overall, but even so there’s a good deal of time spent in setting things up that I liked.
It does move fast in the narrative however, which I think takes something away from the characters themselves. They are connecting, in various wats, but that’s not really allowed to be explored before the erotica comes to the fore and pushes the rest of the story building aside.
Still, the beginning was promising and it offered a lot of story options for the following book to delve into.
The second half of the series doesn’t touch on any succubus aspects, it’s focused on vampires in this universe and tells a small story about that. It’s interesting, but it’s not about succubi or incubi, though they are mentioned in passing.
Combined, the two short stories really don’t have a lot to connect them other than the bar itself. I’m not sure that turning the story away from the succubus aspects was really a good idea. There’s story untold about Ava and the other succubus in the work. More so, Brian’s story and reactions needed to be explored more than they were.
For the series as a whole, three out of five pitchforks.
It seems that there will not be a third work in the series, which is a shame. It would be nice to focus on Ava, to tell her story, how the bar came to be. What’s the society like for succubi and incubi, perhaps most importantly, what’s hidden in the shadows to be told? All are interesting ideas and it’s the open door that is left behind when the last word arrives.
External Links
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available
- This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com