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Lili the Succubus: Part IV - The Demon Lord (eBook)
| Lili the Succubus: Part IV - The Demon Lord | |
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 Lili the Succubus: Part IV - The Demon Lord eBook Cover, written by Alfred Nagamoto | |
| Author(s) | Alfred Nagamoto |
| Series | Lili the Succubus |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | April 28, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 14 Pages |
| ASIN | B0C3YD7NPX |
| Preceded by | Lili the Succubus: Part III - The Hunter |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Lili the Succubus: Part IV - The Demon Lord is an eBook written by Alfred Nagamoto. It is the fourth work in the Lili the Succubus series by this author. In this work the character Lili is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Lili the Succubus: Part IV - The Demon Lord
- Author: Alfred Nagamoto
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 14 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0C3YD7NPX
- Publishing Date: April 28, 2023
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- Lili the Succubus: Part I
- Lili the Succubus: Part II - The New Victim
- Lili the Succubus: Part III - The Hunter
Plot Summary
A notorious succubus challenges a powerful demon prying on her territory. Lili uses her newfound powers, aided by a powerful whip, and ventures into the demon lair to test her abilities and send a message. A lustful and dangerous encounter opens Lili's mind to another kind of pleasure she had forgotten about. Her succubus nature can entice even the most powerful of creatures.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 2, 2023
There’s never really enough power for succubi like Lili. Her appetites grow with every moment and she delights in all she has done and could do. But there is a problem needing to be dealt with. The deomon Uruk is a threat, but if Lili has her way, he will become another of her tools… and fools.
There’s a bit of a gap in time between the prior work and this one, during which Lili’s powers have grown and her sights have been set on getting more power for herself. Much of that is skimmed over in reflection as she adores herself before setting off to find the rival to her plans from which the erotica happens.
The passages with Uruk have some delightful mind control and succubus control aspects that worked well in telling the story. There’s some very hot moments where Lili is very much the powerful seductress she is and I enjoyed those moments. But much like the scenes in the prior works, it feels rushed and really could have been so much better overall. I would have loved to see Lili being truly evil and seductive, to push the heat as Uruk must battle Lili’s nature but the heat felt tepid and I wish it wasn’t.
Again, this work needs another editing pass for the dialogue and the narrative to sound better. If the author would read the words out loud it’s easy to tell that something’s off very often and it wouldn’t take much to clean that up. The overall idea is good, Lili is wonderfully evil and so very much a succubus. The problem is that all of that isn’t really coming to the fore as it really should be.
Three pitchforks out of five.
There’s a path forwards for Lili and the series, which is good. Her character is transforming and developing which is even better. What’s missing is really exploring Lili, bringing more life to the story and series. Most of all, editing the work to make it flow better would add so much. I hope the next work in the series will be something more directed at Lili ruling the town and facing a real threat to her goals. Prehaps in that she will become something more than she has become.