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Touch of the Futa (eBook)
| Touch of the Futa | |
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 Touch of the Futa eBook Cover, written by Isabel Baudin | |
| Author(s) | Isabel Baudin |
| Series | Demonic Legion of Futa Succubus |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | March 22, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 11 Pages |
| ASIN | B0BZF93N2T |
| Preceded by | Kiss of the Futa |
| Followed by | Curse of the Futa |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Touch of the Futa is an eBook written by Isabel Baudin. It is the third work in the Demonic Legion of Futa Succubus series by this author. In this work the character Mahalia is a futa Succubus, the character Briana is transformed into being a futa Succubus, and several other mentioned characters are futa Succubi
Overview
- Title: Touch of the Futa
- Author: Isabel Baudin
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 11 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BZF93N2T
- Publishing Date: March 22, 2023
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
When someone is cursed to a lifetime of lust, love is nothing but a pipe dream. If you are a Demonic Succubus, Futa, you need sex to survive, and what good is love?
These are questions that Briana's sire has her asking herself as she explores a relationship with her new thrall, her old best friend Stacy. Briana wants the woman to love her. She wants to be on equal footing with her, but can they ever have that kind of relationship again when Stacy is her slave?
This is the continuation of a Futa on Female series of erotic shorts by author Isabel Baudin. Warning. These books will contain non con and beautiful demonic women who are packing. It is not for the feint of heart.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 9, 2023
The work continues the series immediately from the prior work and for the most part focuses on Mahalia and Briana being intimate. As they do so, Stacey, the new character in the series, completes her transformation and pins for her Mistress. Much like the prior works, the story is very rushed and doesn’t do a lot to expand on the story or give some needed character development.
There continues to be a need for a serious editing of the work, the dialogue is flat, the narrative can’t quite find itself. Stacy’s transformation is skimmed over, which is a shame. Given what little that is described in the small paragraph there is, at least five or six pages of transformation and mind control erotica could have been explored. The erotic moments between Briana and Mahalia read like a summary of what happens as well and given the small amount of character development, that really needed to be explored too.
The work still reads like a roleplay, there’s really not enough detail in the transformations and the personality changes. The dialogue reads flat and overall there’s not a lot of passion. Given that this is a pamphlet in length, that’s not surprising. But still, some more effort to breathe life into the story would make this so much better and it should be.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
Hopefully the next work in the series will bring some time spent in growing the characters. It’s a shame the works are so short, and the story isn’t being written to allow things to read better and become more engaging. We’ll see what part four brings.